Monday, August 31, 2020

BLUE MOON MONDAY OPEN CRITIQUE!!!!!

 



Okay, guys, some of you know the drill:

You post a few paragraphs/a page in the comments and we lovingly rip it apart.

Sound fun?????

BIG SMILE HERE!

Well, that's kind of a stretch, some of us are very nice, some of us are barely human, but what we want and long for is your success as an author/writer/storyteller.

We'll offer advice...

And you decide to take it or leave it.

But every book, every story, every novella begins with an idea that needs to be fleshed out and unforgettable characters.

That's what you want to strive for: People who tug the heart for good or evil and a story that stands the test of time.

So polish things up, you can give us an intro (especially helpful if these aren't opening lines) and post it here, today and let the games begin!

But in the meantime, darlings, if you want to be a writer, there are no secrets. None. Not one. No short cuts, either.

If you want to be a writer, you need to write.

And that's the bottom line.

Good morning, Seekerville!!!!

And happy writing!


The Seekers began as fifteen wannabe authors who forged a bond back in 2004 and 2005 to begin a group, an online loop, to pray one another into publication by a royalty paying publisher... They accomplished that goal in a very competitive business, a business with only so many slots open annually in traditional publishing, and they did it together... and they're still helping others.

Because they believe that there's room for all of us, that limits are self-inflicted and that (especially now with indie publishing) that authors should work hard and reach for the stars... but they promise you that the work comes first! 

Blue Moon Mondays are breaks in our schedule where we have an extra Monday to be filled with either critiques or guests, but we love, love, love working with authors.

So jump in!

The water's fine.

Sunday, August 30, 2020

Sunday Scripture & Prayer Request

Get Thee Behind Me Satan, James Tissot, 1886-1894, Brooklyn Museum. [PD-US]


Jesus began to show his disciples
that he must go to Jerusalem and suffer greatly
from the elders, the chief priests, and the scribes,
and be killed and on the third day be raised. 
Then Peter took Jesus aside and began to rebuke him,
“God forbid, Lord! No such thing shall ever happen to you.” 
He turned and said to Peter,
“Get behind me, Satan! You are an obstacle to me. 
You are thinking not as God does, but as human beings do."

Then Jesus said to his disciples,
“Whoever wishes to come after me must deny himself,
take up his cross, and follow me. 
For whoever wishes to save his life will lose it,
but whoever loses his life for my sake will find it.
What profit would there be for one to gain the whole world
and forfeit his life? 
Or what can one give in exchange for his life? 
For the Son of Man will come with his angels in his Father’s glory,
and then he will repay all according to his conduct.”
Matthew 16:21-27

Our prayers go out to all those impacted by Hurricane Laura, 
especially the good folks in Louisiana, Texas, Arkansas and Mississippi.
Let us know how you're doing if you were in the storm's path.

The Seekerville bloggers are praying for YOU and for our entire blog community. If you have any special intentions that need additional prayer coverage, leave a request for prayer in the comment section below. 

Please join us in praying for the United States--and the world--during this coronavirus outbreak. Also please pray for calm to be restored to our country and for peace to reign.

We are so grateful for all of you—for your friendship and your support! 

May the Lord bless you and your families and keep you safe.  


Saturday, August 29, 2020

Weekend Edition


  



If you are not familiar with our giveaway rules, take a minute to read them here. It keeps us all happy! All winners should send their name, address, and phone number to claim prizes.  Note our new email address and please send your emails to Seekerville2@gmail.com







Monday: Erica went back to the basics and talked about Finding Your Voice.

Wednesday: Cate chatted with readers about how our reading tastes have changed over time. We had a great walk down memory lane with some favorite characters.

Friday: Pam and her friends shared ideas for Passive Income. If you missed the post, check it out to get ideas to jumpstart your passive income strategy.



Monday:  Blue Moon Monday Open Critique!!!!!! Seekers will take a break from other things to review and offer advice on your work-- online and in the open-- EEK!!! :) Think Joshua 1:9 and be brave, my friends! Be of great courage. The only way to get to the top is to keep on climbing, even when it's tough. 

Wednesday:  Mindy will be here to talk about Revisions, Edits and Other Necessary Evils.
  
Friday: Surprise!






Join ACFW DFW via Zoom on Saturday, September 12, 2020 – 10:30a-12p CDT with award-winning author, Mindy Obenhaus as she presents, “God is in the Details, and We Should be, Too.” She will use this time to share with and guide us on how we can craft characters our readers will care about beyond the “The End.”

REGISTRATION IS REQUIRED. For more information on this event, click here 

More Amish Suspense
From USA TODAY bestselling author
DEBBY GIUSTI

Amish Christmas Search
Oct 2020
An Amish girl’s disappearance is a mystery…
and the clues lead straight into danger at Christmas.
Convinced her friend didn’t run away as the police
believe, Lizzie Kauffman searches for the truth—but
someone will kill to keep it hidden. Now the Amish
housekeeper and her friend Caleb Zook are on the
run for their lives. And if they want to find their
missing friend, Lizzie and Caleb must figure out
a way to survive the holiday.

Pre-order HERE!










Becoming a Sensitive, Responsible Fiction Writer by CS Lakin at Live Write Thrive

My Favorite Writing Rule (That I Made Up) by Angela Ruth Strong at Learn How To Write A Novel


Afraid To Let Anyone Read Your Writing? by KM Weiland at Helping Writers Become Authors

12 Authors on YouTube with Writing & Publishing Tips by Leila Hirschfeld at Book Bub Partners Blog







Friday, August 28, 2020

Passive Income With an Emphasis on Writers


Today’s topic covers a wide range of ways to generate passive income, especially with the home-based writer in mind. Let’s just dive in, shall we?

First, what is passive income? I like this description from Wiki…

Passive income is income that requires little to no effort to earn and maintain. [notice MY emphasis on maintain] It is called progressive [again, my emphasis] passive income when the earner expends little effort to grow the income.

That sounds simple enough, but let’s go ahead and admit that there will be some kind of effort to set up a stream of passive income. This effort comes in the forms of time and/or money. Some ideas I saw to make “passive income” aren’t that passive, so I’m going to focus mostly to true forms of passive income where once your “investment” is finalized, it continues to work for you for a long, long time.

Let’s start with time. One person’s idea of using their time to set up a stream of passive income might be another person’s worst nightmare. For instance, while researching for this blog post, blogging (for money via ads, product placement, and affiliations), designing book covers, and copyediting were listed as ways to make passive income. Unless each blog post can be used over and over forever, that’s not truly passive income. Copyediting is work… since you have to contribute your time for each project. IMO, that’s not fully passive. So, for a venture to be truly passive time wise, it needs a bit of time to set up, then it churns out money for years to come. Examples: writing/publishing books, becoming an affiliate, creating podcasts or videos in your area of expertise.

Money. Some passive income strategies take more money to set up than they do time, although there is a learning curve for everything, of course. We’ll come back to this, but a couple of good examples are dividend investing and rental property. While these aren’t specific to writers, this post is about using your time and money to create passive income, and I’m all about that, as long as it’s legal.

One other thing before we jump in. Whether you are working a public job, working from home, retired, or a combination of all three, working out a steady stream of passive income to pay you a bit of “pocket change” can be done. Applied month after month, project after project, and year after year, and eventually, that pocket change can add up to enough to live on… and then some.

The College Investor website gave a really nice breakdown of all kinds of passive income strategies, with links and how-to’s. I combed through this list and found what looked to be the best of the best for true “set it up and forget about it” streams of income.


I highlighted the ones on this list that were most interesting to me personally and I’ll discuss them in order that the article above lists them.

Dividend Stocks

Dividend paying stocks is what got me to thinking about passive income and led to this post. There’s a reason this article and many, many others list dividend stocks as the #1 source of passive income.

Dividend investing is so much easier and accessible to the average person these days due to commission free accounts and mobile apps so that an investor can buy and sell stocks right from their phone. That’s pretty cool. So if you like spending your free time crunching numbers, then this might be a way to add to your passive income “portfolio”.

This strategy will take a lot (a LOT) more money than time. I recommend reading Dividend Growth Machine by Nathan Winklepleck and The Snowball Effect by Timothy McIntosh if dividend investing interests you.

Check out the Dividend Aristocrats and the Dividend Kings. These blue chip stocks have consistently increased their dividend payout for (a gazillion) years. Okay, I’m stretching that a bit, but they are consistent.

Mind-Blowing Thought: AT&T, a Dividend Aristocrat, is currently paying 6.96% dividend yield per share. Shares of this writing were $29.92. Reinvest your dividends and your money continues to grow quarter after quarter, year after year. If you invested $10K into AT&T stock, at the end of 10 years, your stock should be worth almost $20 grand even if the stock price remained the same and the dividend payout continued to grow yearly. (This is not a recommendation to buy AT&T or advice on investing. It’s simply an example.) But who has $10K to invest? Not me, but the principal remains the same. Invest and continue to reinvest for your future and that of your heirs.

Final Mind-Blowing Thought: Marry a Dividend Investment plan to a Roth IRA. It’s a wonderful thing.


$$$ My Current Monthly Dividend Income on a small portfolio: $9.44 $$$


Write/Sell Books

Okay, so now we’re getting to a passive income strategy that we, as writers, understand. Mostly.

As we all know, writing books is hard work. It takes a lot of effort on the front end. But the good news is that once your book is published and remains published, it has the potential to continually make you (and your heirs) money for many, many years.

Maybe it seems like it’s not passive if you are continually writing new books and adding new content to your backlist.

But it is. Passive income means that one book (print, ebook, audio, foreign, etc.) is creating passive income month and after month, year after year. If you have ten published books, then all of them have the potential to create passive income.

Final Mind-Blowing Thought: I know writers who make $10 a month and those who make $10,000 a month. (Or so I’ve heard.) Write that book and get it published.

Then do it again. The first is in the bag, so that income, even if it’s just $5 a month, is now passive income. Much like reinvesting your dividends in stock prices, the second book shines a spotlight on the first book and spikes its income threshold… if you do your job right. Then the third book spotlights the first two, and so on.

I already have several traditional novels and novellas  published with Tyndale and Barbour, and I’m taking steps to Independently publish some novellas that have already been written and edited. All of this work feeds off of each other.

I'm working on a cover and will be formatting my first independent novella soon. As Seekerville is my witness, I will publish these novellas! All these other projects to generate income are nice, but it makes sense for a writer to write and get her stuff out there.


$$$ Let’s be real conservative and estimate that an author can make $10 a month off of a stable of 10 published novels and novels. $$$


Stock Photos

If you have a knack for taking pictures, consider uploading them to a stock photo site. This seems like work to me, but for some who enjoy the process and is knowledgeable about photos, it could be fun and bring in a few dollars extra cash. Passive income from a hobby. What’s not to love? The College Investor has links to whet your appetite for this.


Online Writing Related Content, Reviewers, Influencers, and Affiliate Marketing

I lumped all of these together because they kind of go hand in hand. Are you an expert in some field that you could create audio (podcasts) and/or video (youtube, etc.) content? If you are, or you blog or maintain a website, or have a huge presence on social media, then you have the potential to monetize that experience. You might receive a free book to review, then also include the link to buy back through your Amazon affiliate account. Amazon Affiliates is a good way to share all your favorite products, including BOOKS.

Food bloggers do the same when they share a recipe and include affiliate links to purchase specialty items. Mommy bloggers blog about all things related to their kiddos. On a vacation a few years ago, my husband and I met a couple and their two kids from Germany who were bicycling across Canada and the US and blogging about it. They were influencers for a three-wheel tandem bike and kiddie trailer and blogged about their travels. It was a win-win for them and for the company they were promoting.

Also called Influencers, these bloggers receive free products to review all across social media. But a weight of responsibility comes with this. Just as publishers and authors vet the list of influencers they provide with free books, retailers vet their list of influencers. Only pursue this avenue if you truly believe in a company and their products.

Lumping advertising here. I have NOT gone down this rabbit trail with social media, but if you already have a platform, then why not? Search for things like, “five ways to monetize social media” or “monetize _________” (fill in the blank with Twitter, Instagram, Youtube, etc.). Watch a few videos and develop a strategy. If you are already reading and reviewing, you might be missing out on some lucrative areas of passive income.

Done well and with a mutual respect between the retailer, the influencer and the consumer, this is a two-fer for influencers: Free product plus being an affiliate for whatever product they’re promoting. Pretty cool.

Okay, I could go on and on, but you get the drift, and I need to wrap this up and let you guys share your thoughts on passive income. 


Some bullet points to leave with you …

1) Do NOT think of passive income as a get-rich-quick scheme. We’re talking a dollar here, a dollar there.

2) Pick one or two (three at most) doable passive income strategies that appeal to you and only pursue those. Don’t get sidetracked with big $$$ signs. We’re talking PENNIES a week/month sometimes. After a while, you can re-think your strategy, add and/or take away an income stream if it’s not working in your favor.

3) Cash Back and Awards Points Opportunities. My mom is a huge believer in her Choice Privileges card which rewards points for travel. Do your due diligence and use cards that give you the awards you prefer. Since I rarely travel, this hasn’t been a good fit for me. Cashback Rewards Cards (#27 on the College Investor site) links to lots of cash back credit cards, so you might find one that meets your needs if this is appealing to you.


Did you get on the ebates wave a few years ago? I did (I think it was a Seeker who recommended it!) and made $64 back in 2018, mostly Christmas shopping that year. It fell by the wayside and I totally forgot to use it. Rakuten bought ebates, so I updated my account using my handy-dandy mobile app, and started intentionally buying things using Rakuten for cash back as of this writing. I’ve made a whopping $1.16 cash back this week on a Walgreens order for my mom … on an order I was going to place anyway. Plus, I got a discount of $10.80 for creating a new Walgreens account. (If you don’t have an old ebates account, you’ll get $10 for creating a new Rakuten account.)

Unfortunately, Walmart and Amazon have a zero cash back policy with Rakuten at the moment. Just so you know.

$$$ Savings last week using Rakuten and Walgreens: $11.96 $$$

Sign up for Rakuten and get cash back, plus if you use this link, I get cash back. 


4) TRIM THE FAT - Cancel subscriptions you aren’t using. I just cancelled two that I thought I really needed in my life, but that I never use.

$$$ Monthly savings on those two subscriptions: $12.00 $$$


Bottom line. There are really NO real sources of passive income that I’ve found. Everything, and I mean EVERYTHING, in life requires SOME investment of some sort. The only thing I can think of that even comes close (other than manna from Heaven!) is a bunch of free-range chickens like my son has, but even then you have to pick up the eggs. 


$$$ 2 dozen free range hen eggs, plus 2 dozen quail eggs: about $2.65  $$$

So, let’s add up the passive income I’ve intentionally generated over the last few weeks. Granted, some of these won’t be every month (like cancelling subscriptions you’re no longer using), but every so often (maybe at tax time), look at those recurring fees and see if you really want to spend $120 or $240 on something every year. If not, cut it.


$$$ $46.05 a month, including the eggs. Pretty cool, huh? $$$

(The eggs were a freebie, but kind of a fun aside this week)


Well, there you have it. Passive Income with just a handful of strategies. I wanted to touch base on SO many more of these, but this blog post has already gone on way too long. Did you come up with any ideas for passive income while reading this? Has this whetted your appetite to get that novel finished and published? Or maybe you’re ready to start that Youtube channel? I’d love to hear your ideas!


CBA Bestselling author PAM HILLMAN was born and raised on a dairy farm in Mississippi and spent her teenage years perched on the seat of a tractor raking hay. In those days, her daddy couldn't afford two cab tractors with air conditioning and a radio, so Pam drove an Allis Chalmers 110. Even when her daddy asked her if she wanted to bale hay, she told him she didn't mind raking. Raking hay doesn't take much thought so Pam spent her time working on her tan and making up stories in her head. Now, that's the kind of life every girl should dream of. www.pamhillman.com


Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Let's Hear from Our Readers

 Good morning, Seekerville.  

As I started to type that, I couldn't help it. My brain burst out with this.


We really are our own wonderful neighborhood here. 


So today I was hoping we could grab a mug of coffee or tea, maybe share some donuts, and just hang out and chat about reading. 

I have a couple of reasons why I've chosen to do this post today.

1) Criminal Minds  - I will come back to this.

2) Pandemic Reading

3) A question from a workshop I attended.


I'm going to do these backwards because #3 is the most recent. In a workshop I attended, we were asked to write about things we enjoyed from our childhood. Honestly, the first thing I came up with - and the only one I didn't have to think hard about - was READ.

There were other questions, but my first answer to all of them was either a book title or READ.

I've always known reading was a major factor in my life and development, but answering these questions just emphasized for me how dominant a role books and reading have played throughout my life.

Which brings me to #2 - pandemic reading. 

This has been a mixed bag. There have been books that have totally consumed me for days at a time, and then there have been dozens that (through no fault of their own) couldn't wrangle my skittish attention span. But the ones that did capture me - oh they reminded me of why I love books so much. They allowed me to step out of a pandemic-ridden world into a place of magic.

I guess my daughter knew what she was doing when she gave me this mug for Christmas.


So that brings me to Point #1 - Criminal Minds.

I've spent a lot of days this summer with day-long marathons of Criminal Minds playing in the background as I wrote my next suspense novel. I have sort of a love-hate relationship with this show. Years ago, when it was running, I couldn't watch it because frankly I found it terrifying. But I happened to stumble upon the final episode when it aired back in February, and I was captivated by the personal relationships between the characters and the very believable camaraderie.

I discovered my cable station running marathons, and I learned that I could skip the first five minutes with the bloody criminal introduction, and just focus on the profilers - their relationships and their methodology for solving the crimes. Sure I still had to cover my eyes from time to time, but I found myself feeling like I was hanging out with a group of friends.

{For anyone who may not know, Criminal Minds follows the BAU (Behavioral Analysis Unit) of the FBI as they profile unsubs and solve crimes - usually serial killers and always gory. I cover my eyes A LOT.}

Jan and Mary may never forgive me for this comparison, but it reminded me of how I used to feel as a child when I hung out with The Happy Hollisters in their books - me with a group of fictional friends. Hopefully that doesn't sound as pathetic as it sounded to me when I wrote it. 😍

So now, in my roundabout way, I've gotten to the point of this post. Because of my fascination with the characters of Criminal Minds, I read an article about it called "Criminal Minds is ending after 15 years - here's why we're OK with that." There were a lot of of interesting points raised in the article, (and some I disagreed with), but the gist of it was that the world is very different now than it was in 2005 when the show premiered, and that audience tastes have changed. Themes that were popular back then, are not tolerated now. That article really stuck in my head, and I've thought of it often when people talk about likes and dislikes with books or shows.

THAT is what I wanted to talk about today. Have your tastes as readers/viewers changed over the years? If so, is there anything you enjoyed in the past that you wouldn't want to read now? Or vice-versa. Are there topics, themes, locations that you never were interested in before but now want?

And the followup question - what stories would you like to read that you are just not seeing out there?

I know we're talking about books here, but feel free to extend the discussion to your taste in film or TV shows as well.


And if you'd like to talk about your pandemic reading or childhood pleasures, please do. Were books important to you when you were growing up? What role does reading play in your life now?


Let's chat. I'll bring the coffee and donuts.



Image by Skyler H. from Pixabay 

Monday, August 24, 2020

Finding Your Voice

 


There are several aspects of writing for publication that can be unbelievably frustrating. The waiting. The search for the right agent. The submission process. 

And then there's the nebulous feedback you get on your writing. 

Show don't tell. Resist the urge to explain. Your pacing is off. 

One of the most frustrating bits of feedback I received was "You need to find your voice." 

My voice? How do I find my voice when I thought I was using my voice to write all along?

What is 'voice' anyway? VOICE is your unique way of writing. It's your vocabulary, your sentence length, your style choices, your way of creating that are solely yours. Voice is how you tell the difference between Mary Connealy and Ruth Logan Herne's blog posts. It's how you tell the difference between Arthur Conan Doyle and Charlotte Bronte, between A. A. Milne and Stephen King.

You might be thinking, "That's ridiculous. No one would mistake the author of Winnie-the-Pooh and the author Cujo for one another."

You're right, because those authors developed their unique voices to be different from any other author out there.

Did you know that when most people begin to write fiction, especially if they begin writing in earnest as an adult, they often write in a style of the authors who have influenced them. It's a sort of homage to those writers.

For me, the first time I submitted a proposal to an editor, I received the feedback that my writing sounded like Violet Winspear. 

Violet Winspear was a British novelist who wrote for Mills & Boon during the 60s, 70s, and 80s. 

That editor wasn't far off, since one of my favorite authors of all time is Essie Summers, a New Zealand novelist who wrote for Mills & Boon during the 60s, 70s, 80s, and into the 90s. 

When I re-read my first efforts as a novelist, I see the similarities. I was writing in the style of a beloved author, not in my own writing voice.

So how does a writer move from copying an author who influenced them and begin writing their own voice?

1. Read Widely. Rather than focus on just your favorite authors, read widely. Don't bathe your mind in one style or genre, instead sample lots of styles and authors. It's fairly easy to find yourself copying one writer's style, but it's impossible to copy EVERY writer's style.

2. Write. Write Write Write Write Write. I cannot stress this enough. You learn and discover your own writing voice by using it! Write narrative, write dialogue, write description, write action, write, write, write!  As you write, you will flex those voice muscles, letting go of old habits and bents and establishing your particular way of writing. 

3. Edit your writing. Re-read your work. As you read, you'll think "Oh, I should put a line of dialogue about __________ in here." and in a couple of lines, you'll see that you did. Or "I need to drop a hint here as to what the heroine is thinking." and less than half a page later, you read that you have already done that. You will know your own voice as you read.

4. Set a test. Send a critique partner half a dozen writing samples they've never seen before (only one of them yours) and see if they can pick out the one that you wrote.  If they can, you have found your voice! 


Voice is both complicated and simple. But truthfully, you WILL discover your unique voice through writing, reading widely, and editing your work. You won't have found it, and then one day, you will. 

QUESTION OF THE DAY: Have you found your writing voice?

BONUS QUESTION OF THE DAY: What's the most FRUSTRATING piece of writing advice you've gotten? 

The Gentleman Spy has released! 

He only wanted a duchess for a day--but she’s determined to make it a marriage for life

When his father and older brother suddenly pass away, the new Duke of Haverly is saddled with a title he never expected to bear. To thwart the plans of his scheming family, the duke impulsively marries a wallflower. After all, she’s meek and mild; it should be easy to sequester her in the country and get on with his life--as a secret agent for the Crown.

But his bride has other ideas. She’s determined to take her place not only as his duchess but as his wife. As a duchess, she can use her position to help the lowest of society--the women forced into prostitution because they have no skills or hope. Her endeavors are not met favorably in society, nor by her husband who wishes she’d remain in the background as he ordered.

Can the duke succeed in relegating her to the sidelines of his life? When his secrets are threatened with exposure, will his new wife be an asset or a liability?


You can get your copy of The Gentleman Spy HERE!



Best-selling, award-winning author Erica Vetsch loves Jesus, history, romance, and sports. She’s a transplanted Kansan now living in Minnesota, and she is married to her total opposite and soul mate! When she’s not writing fiction, she’s planning her next trip to a history museum and cheering on her Kansas Jayhawks and New Zealand All Blacks.

You can connect with her at her website, www.ericavetsch.com where you can read about her books and sign up for her newsletter, and you can find her at online  https://www.facebook.com/EricaVetschAuthor/ 
where she spends way too much time!


Sunday, August 23, 2020

Sunday Scripture & Prayer Requests

Christ Handing the Keys to Saint Peter, Pietro Perugino, 1481-1482, Sistine Chapel. [PD-US]


Jesus went into the region of Caesarea Philippi and
he asked his disciples,
“Who do people say that the Son of Man is?”
They replied, “Some say John the Baptist, others Elijah,
still others Jeremiah or one of the prophets.”
He said to them, “But who do you say that I am?”
Simon Peter said in reply,
"You are the Christ, the Son of the living God.”
Jesus said to him in reply,
“Blessed are you, Simon son of Jonah.
For flesh and blood has not revealed this to you, but my heavenly Father.
And so I say to you, you are Peter,
and upon this rock I will build my church,
and the gates of the netherworld shall not prevail against it.
I will give you the keys to the kingdom of heaven.
Whatever you bind on earth shall be bound in heaven;
and whatever you loose on earth shall be loosed in heaven.”
Then he strictly ordered his disciples
to tell no one that he was the Christ.

Matthew 16:13-20


The Seekerville bloggers are praying for YOU and for our entire blog community. If you have any special intentions that need additional prayer coverage, leave a request for prayer in the comment section below. 

Please join us in praying for the United States--and the world--during this coronavirus outbreak. Also please pray for calm to be restored to our country and for peace to reign.

We are so grateful for all of you—for your friendship and your support! 

May the Lord bless you and your families and keep you safe. 

Saturday, August 22, 2020

Weekend Edition


  



If you are not familiar with our giveaway rules, take a minute to read them here. It keeps us all happy! All winners should send their name, address, and phone number to claim prizes.  Note our new email address and please send your emails to Seekerville2@gmail.com







Monday: Jan Drexler brought us a Back to Basics Post on Show vs Tell.

Tuesday: Guest Louise Gouge shared "Where Story Begins."

Wednesday: Debby Giusti talked about "Unmasking our Characters!" Thanks to everyone who stopped by to chat.





Monday:  Erica Vetsch will be bringing a post!

Wednesday:  Cate Nolan will be sharing her knowledge!
  
Friday: Pam Hillman will be sharing a post on Passive Income geared toward writers.





When our recent guest Shannon Vannatter and her business partner Linda Fulkerson told us about Scrivenings Press, they mentioned upcoming contests. Here are links to more info! They will be holding two contests:

1. The Get Pubbed Contest. For completed manuscripts with a grand prize of publication, paid registration for an annual author retreat, 25-page critique and Amazon gift card. Genre winners will receive critiques and gift card. And all other entries will receive feedback. For rules and guidelines:  https://scriveningspress.com/get-pubbed/
 
2. The Novel Starts Contest. For uncompleted manuscripts with grand prize of a video writing course, a critique, an invitation to submit your work, and a gift card. Genre winners will receive a critique and gift card. All others will receive feedback. For rules and guidelines:  https://scriveningspress.com/novel-starts/


More Amish Suspense
From USA TODAY bestselling author
DEBBY GIUSTI

Amish Christmas Search
Oct 2020
An Amish girl’s disappearance is a mystery…
and the clues lead straight into danger at Christmas.
Convinced her friend didn’t run away as the police
believe, Lizzie Kauffman searches for the truth—but
someone will kill to keep it hidden. Now the Amish
housekeeper and her friend Caleb Zook are on the
run for their lives. And if they want to find their
missing friend, Lizzie and Caleb must figure out
a way to survive the holiday.

Pre-order HERE!






My 8 Favorite Platforms to Market Your Books by LA Sartor at Book Brush Blog

What's A Tag Line? And Why You Need One by James L. Rubart at Learn How To Write A Novel

5 Exercises for Honing Your Story Instincts by KM Weiland at Helping Writers Become Authors

When It Doesn't Go Quite As Planned by Susan May Warren at Learn How To Write A Novel

How To Choose A Pen Name That Builds Your Brand by CS Lakin at The Self Publisher

Cut To The Chase: Tools For Revisions by Rochelle Melander at Fiction University

The Day I Almost Gave Up Writing by Lucinda Secret McDowell at The Write Conversation











Wednesday, August 19, 2020

Unmasking Our Characters


By Debby Giusti

Masks Required!

Masks have become the new norm, although I’m sure many of us think they’re a nuisance. Yes, they protect us—somewhat—from the corona virus, but they’re uncomfortable to wear. They cut off airflow and hamper breathing. Carrying on a conversation while wearing them is difficult and reading lips is impossible.

Personally, I like seeing people smile and frequently fail to recognize folks—even good friends—when their faces are covered.

So what does mask wearing have to do with writing?

Remember internal conflict? That’s the fear or flaw or wound our characters have from the past that causes them to hide behind a…?

That’s right! 

A MASK!!!


Since we’re up to our eyeballs in masks, quite literally, during this pandemic, I hope we’ve become more aware of our characters’ plight as they struggle with their imperfections. They worry someone will peer behind their false facades and see the truth they’re trying to hide. Regrettably, many of them have worn masks so long they’ve come to believe their faux identities represent who they truly are.

So what do we writers need to remember as we craft our stories?

First, we have to determine our hero’s wounds or flaws or fears.

Second, we need to identify the various ways he has learned to hide that of which he is most ashamed.

Third, we need to plot our stories to ensure the hero has the courage to remove his mask and embrace his true self. Only then is he able to achieve his external goal, declare his love for the heroine and embrace life to the full!


My debut novel, Scared to Death, featured a single mom who was afraid of water. When the men who killed her husband try to kidnap her young son, she and the boy flee to her aunt’s house. Do you know where the aunt lives? Of course, you do because you’re writers. The aunt lives in a gated island community. In fact, the aunt’s house is a beachfront mansion so the heroine mom, in her attempt to protect her son, has placed herself near the water she fears. I won’t spoil the story for you, but rest assured, the mom has to take off the mask she’s been wearing, admit her fear and then confront it head-on to save her son.

In Amish Safe House, a cop’s wife and small daughter were killed by an escaped criminal he sent to prison. Feeling responsible for their deaths, he handed in his badge and returned to the Amish community he left long ago. The new reclusive life he has created is threatened when a law enforcement friend asks him to shelter a divorced woman and her two children on the run from one of the country’s most vicious gangs. The reason the hero wears a mask includes not only the guilt he carries after his loved ones’ deaths but also hurtful accusations by his authoritative father long ago that the hero has accepted as truth. When the gang closes in, the hero must ignore the memory of his father’s taunts and face his fear of not being able to protect the people he loves.

In Dangerous Amish Inheritance, my heroine sacrificed her own happiness ten years ago to care for her ailing father in hopes of making amends for a mistake she made in her youth. Misfortune haunted her until the beginning of the story when the father of her secret baby returns to Amish Mountain, but the hero carries his own guilt for leaving the woman he loved and the son, now nine years old, who instantly steals his heart. When danger closes in, the hero and heroine must remove their masks and move beyond their past mistakes to keep their son alive.

As you brainstorm your stories, remember to focus on your hero’s wound or flaw or fear. In so doing, you’ll create exciting and intriguing ways for your character to change and grow. Just remember that at the end of the story, the hero has to discard his mask and accept himself as he truly is so he and the heroine can live happily ever after.

Happy writing! Happy reading!

Wishing you abundant blessings,

Debby Giusti

www.DebbyGiusti.com

 

Amish Christmas Search

Oct 2020

An Amish girl’s disappearance is a mystery…

and the clues lead straight into danger at Christmas.

Convinced her friend didn’t run away as the police

believe, Lizzie Kauffman searches for the truth—but

someone will kill to keep it hidden. Now the Amish

housekeeper and her friend Caleb Zook are on the

run for their lives. And if they want to find their

missing friend, Lizzie and Caleb must figure out

a way to survive the holiday.

 Pre-order HERE!