Friday, May 27, 2022

Listen when Your Characters Speak


 

Hello, the camp! Tasha Hackett here, author of Bluebird on the Prairie and many more to come. Mary asked if I would share something I’ve learned as an author. Of course my first thought was: “Everything. Duh. I’ve learned everything.” I went from knowing nothing, to learning everything and still somehow knowing nothing. But aside from the tangible how-tos, I’ve learned how to listen when my characters speak.


Chances are, they have a lot to say, and if you can figure out how to listen to them, you’ll get along much better. How often do you think you’ve made up a story in your own head with your very own make-believe characters, but then they’re off doing and speaking whatever they very well please? We would all do well to listen when our characters speak. I thought I was writing a story about this, but it turned out to be about this. Has that ever happened to you? Though I don’t have as many books under me as some of you, with one published, one drafted, and a thousand to be written, in my time writing these two books, I’ve learned how important it is to listen when my characters speak.

Bluebird on the Prairie started as a whim. My husband and I brainstormed a silly story where Zombie Apocalypse meets Hallmark Western Romance. If you know me at all, you’re already laughing. Tasha is not about to write a book about zombies. Vampires, maybe. Zombies, ew. Once I started writing, I got to know Zeke and Eloise and learned right away they had a story to tell about hope (that didn’t include zombies in any way, shape, or form.) Zombies were out and western was out. I was left with a Swedish prairie town in Nebraska, a widow living with her brother who’d shut herself away from love, and an orphaned traveler on his way to California.

July 7, 2018. I wrote my WHY: “I want my reader to feel hope at the end. Because, to me, novels are an escape to a better place. A place where the hero is strong and brave. A place where people get back up again.

“I want the story to feel real, but I always want LOVE TO OVERCOME. I want God’s grace to expand into my imaginative world and show readers the vast goodness of God’s plan. I want my novels to inspire hope back into the lives of the readers.

“I want the reader to feel the truth of Eloise’s pain and grief and then grow WITH her as she begins to trust God. I want the reader to feel hope that God is real and that he not only sees, but cares and has a plan for us. And I will do it all with a story that pulls the reader into this world where they never feel they’re being preached at.”


Listening to my WHY changed everything. I found I couldn’t write Eloise’s story. This was no longer a silly story where guy-meets-girl and they both run to their happily-ever-after. It suddenly became so much more and I was scared I couldn’t do Eloise justice. Eloise was a young widow, and I didn’t know how to give her a happily-ever-after. You can’t FIX grief. There’s no MOVING ON from grief.

Grief is an emotional suffering caused by or as if by a bereavement. An emotional suffering when something you love has been taken away. How could I write this happily-ever-after for Eloise? The more I got to know her, the more I realized I could NOT send a man to waltz into her life and make everything better. I just wasn’t going to do that. It’s not realistic. Certainly it’s not healthy.


I believe other authors would agree with me when I say, sometimes the stories we write don’t even feel like our stories, but these characters come to us and we have to get to know them and find out what they need and what they want, and then let them tell their own story. That’s not something I understood until I experienced it. Sometimes Zeke would say things to Eloise and I would simply step back and think, “Whaaa? You are so smart. Where you did you learn this?”

Listen to this one. I found it written in my notes, but I didn’t put it in the novel because it’s so good I honestly don’t know if I stole it from someone else and didn’t credit them. From Zeke’s outlook in life: “Hardship does not have the power to rob us of hope for the future.” And, “Happiness and love are granted to all who SEEK IT OUT.”  My character said that. Not me. I’d never say that. Tasha would say, “Fool me once . . . I’m going to be super, doubly sure to be prepared and put up lots of walls so I don’t get hurt again.” Zeke knew better, and he’s a pretty wise dude. He’s clumsy as all get out and oblivious to most things. But still. He’s got great morals.



There I am, back in 2018 trying to write a book, but I can’t figure out what to do for my character Eloise. Because I hadn’t yet found the hope after my own grief. How could I possibly write it for her when I didn’t understand it myself? I’m not (and wasn’t) a widow. But I understand a fair amount of grief. I’m telling you today there is hope after grief. I’m also the girl who couldn’t write that story when I first tried. God had quite a bit of work to do in me (and will continue until I die). I had my fourth child and stopped writing for a season while I learned a hard and beautiful lesson. Namely: There is hope after grief. Zeke and Eloise kept dancing around in my imagination and I kept listening and getting to know them. Finally they were ready to share the rest of their story in Bluebird on the Prairie. A bluebird symbolized hope to me with a nod to Emily Dickinson's poem, “Hope is the thing with feathers,” and what with the bluebird coming back each spring.

Bluebird on the Prairie is available wherever books are sold and my website. You can find it at Walmart.com, Amazon, Barnes & Noble, or my favorite: request from any local bookstore. As a special thank-you, email me a copy of your receipt and I’ll send you Four Ways to Recover Hope. These are four tangible things that I found to be encouraging as I processed my own struggles.

I’d love to get to know you, too! How have your characters been speaking to you? How have you rediscovered hope? You can find me on Instagram @hackettacademy and my website www.TashaHackett.com  and email tasha@tashahackett.com

 Bluebird on the Prairie

by

Tasha Hackett


Haunted by nightmares after her husband's death, Eloise Davidson struggles to find peace. Avoiding the town and the people in it has become part of who she is. When she meets a traveler who falls at her feet, she is more than willing to forget the whole embarrassing thing ever happened. Eloise has enough to worry about without entertaining silly daydreams. But when Zeke threatens the safety net she’s built around herself, she’s not prepared for how her world will change.

 

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18 comments:

  1. Welcome, Tasha! I have to admit, I laughed at the Zombies meet Hallmark comment. Oh, the image in mind!

    I find that my characters tend to go off plan frequently. I don't mind, though. It makes writing their stories exciting.

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    1. Dana I think they go 'off plan' if you're doing it right. I struggle to feel my characters are fully real. When I get to that place, that they ARE real, well, then they have thoughts and ideas of their own.

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    2. Thanks Dana. Wouldn't that be a great story though? I have the whole outline for it if you want to be the one to write it. HA. It ain't gonna be me. ~Tasha

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  2. Tasha, I totally get this and you expressed it very well. In the kind of writing we do, inspired by God and all. I tend to be a plotter for my, well, plots and a pantser for my character development.
    Of course we go from knowing nothing to knowing to not knowing, as our work advances in complexity and as we grow as people. It's like Woody Allen said -- once he was famous, he was rejected by a better class of woman. I've shared that here before. It's in my Repertoire.
    Character development was part of the reason for my seven-months' writers block. I picked it up again about a month ago. They'll tell me something sooner or later, right?
    Kathy Bailey
    Still figuring it out in New Hampshire

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    1. Kaybee, I'm trying to work up the nerve to write a wagon train story and think of you often. I don't know if I'll do it. I find it all a little overwhelming.

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    2. Thanks Kaybee. I plot... loosely. And then spend months getting to know my characters and before I really dig to figure out the plot. But your'e right, keep getting to know who you're writing about and they've got to tell you which why they're gonna go! I try to pray over my work each day that God would grant me the skill and direct my words to be encouraging and entertaining

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  3. Hi Tasha, oh I LOVE your post, I could listen to you or read your words all day long ~ I'll go buy your book! I'm working on a story and I've been stalled out for a while. I'm going to use your advice and go sit quietly with my H&H and listen... Wishing you lots of blessings on your writing!

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    1. Good morning, Karen. I just finished Bluebird on the Prairie. It was a fun book and it also made me wish I had bluebirds around here. :)

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    2. Thanks Karen! Your words are so encouraging. I'm currently writing one about a deep friendship between the couple, my goal is to encourage married couples who need reminded of what it was to just be friends. I'm trying to do a lot of listening right now! What do I need to hear and learn after 15 years of marriage?

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    3. Good morning, Mary, a teacher friend gave me a little glass bluebird long ago & I keep it on a windowsill so the light comes through it! :)

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    4. Tasha, I'm saving your post and printing it out like our good friend Mindy Obenhaus does sometimes! :) Because sitting quietly & listening will bring all kinds of good things to us. The WHY is also a must! And I'm sure you'll get the marriage thing figured out soon. PS I lost my husband 4 years ago & last year I retired & it's been a struggle ~ I tend to want to mimic him & sit in front of the TV & veg (a heart attack did him in), but I'm beginning to break free of this & I will continue to write, why? Because I have to! xx

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  4. Thank you so much for sharing this, Tasha. A few years ago, in the midst of my mother's hospice journey, I heard God say to me that I had to walk through this pain and the grief that was sure to come before I would be ready to write whatever story He was giving me. Last week, Jan (Hi, Jan!) was so kind and generous to help me brainstorm with my characters. But your post makes me think before I get any farther, I need to figure out the WHY and write it out. I need to sit with my characters for a bit and be quiet. They'll let me know why I need to tell their story. Thank you!!

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    1. Glynis I'm sorry about your mom. I went through this with my dad years ago. And it takes a while to get past the grief and remember the good things. God bless you as you go through this. How wonderful that you feel God with you through it. And telling you good will come after the loss.

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    2. What a tough message to hear from God. I've felt that answer as well. "Do you trust me even when it's hard?" Writing out the WHY was huge for motivation and direction. Best wishes with your story.

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  5. Hi Tasha! What a thoughtful take on listening to our characters. I love how stating the "why" of writing your book helped you realize how to hear your characters. I've started so many story thinking the direction I had chosen for my characters was the only one - only to find that stumbling block after stumbling block was put in my way (by God, of course. Afterall, it was His inspiration and He wasn't going to let me write the story wrong!). I learned eventually that if the story was difficult to write, it was because I wasn't listening and hearing the characters.

    Thank you for this insightful post! Best of blessing for all your future books!!

    Audra Harders (google is insisting I remain anonymous, but I'm not listening, LOL)

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  6. Thanks Audra! That's a good point to pay attention not just to what our characters are saying, but what story is God asking you to write. Whew! No pressure 🤪 --Tasha

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  7. The book sounds good. Thanks for a great post, Tasha.

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  8. Thanks, Sandy! --Tasha

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