Wednesday, September 7, 2022

Playing With Acrostics

 


Hello everyone,

Winnie Griggs here. Today I wanted to talk about Acrostics. And just so everyone is on the same page, an Acrostic is a poem or verse, either structured or free form, where certain letters in each line, when read vertically, spell out a word or phrase. And the word that is formed refers back to the verse itself. For instance if the word formed is clock, then the verse itself would be about some aspect of clocks or time.

Now, don’t confuse an Acrostic with an Acronym. While similar, there is a key difference. An acronym uses the first letter of each word (sometimes excluding prepositions) to form a shortcut word. For example NASA (National Aeronautics and Space Administration), FBI (Federal Bureau of Investigation), and Scuba (Self-Contained Underwater Breathing Apparatus). An Acrostic, on the other hand, is a verse where certain letters from each line have significance but are not intended to be taken as a substitute for the whole. 

Of course I’ve known about acrostics since my schooldays. But what I didn’t know until recently is that there were so many different forms of acrostics.  So today I thought I’d give quick description and example of each

There is, of course, the Conventional Acrostic.

This is the one you usually have in mind when you think about acrostics. In a conventional acrostic, it is the first letter of each line that forms the word. For instance, here is an acrostic I worked up on one of my favorite flowers. (Caveat, I’m by no means a poet)

Tall and splendid

Uniquely bell-shaped

Lovely to look at

In the words of Mary Poppins

Practically perfect in every way


 

 And just because I was on a roll, here's one I did using my name

Wife, mother, sister, daughter, friend

Informed by these precious relationships

Notes from songs of love and laughter

Necessarily tinged with droplets of pain and loss

Inspiration is born in these moments

Eventually emerging in the pages of a book 

 

Then there’s the Telestich Acrostic

This one uses the LAST letter of each line to form the word or phrase. Again, I tried my hand at writing one (and I found this one much more difficult than the other!) and here is what I came up with:

When I’m down they’re therapeutic

I’ll have one, no make it two

Chocolate chip and peanut butter too

But oh there’s shortbread and macaroons—it’s so hard to pick

Especially when you throw in gingersnap and biscotti

Who am I fooling by saying just two, certainly not me

My willpower’s no proof against their siren calls

 

A third type is the Mesostich Acrostic

For this one, letters from somewhere in the middle of each line are aligned and used to form the word or phrase. For example:

                   A harbinger of spring
              With a rosy red breast
And a short thin beak
               Your bright blue eggs
Have a beauty unique 

 



 

Adding more complexity is the Double Acrostic.

This one requires that both the first letter of each line AND the last letter of each line form words.  My attempt at this one is a bit convoluted, but here it is.

Ride along as if on a magic carpet
Over hill and dale, past trees and a river
Accompanied by friends, sipping on a chai
Destination aside, it's fun riding with pals in my Jeep

 

The last two forms don’t actually form words with a single letter. They take the Acrostic in a different direction 

You have the Abecedarian

Like a Conventional Acrostic, you focus on the first letter of each line. But instead of those letters forming a word, they are successive letters of the alphabet. So, if the poem were written in English, there would be 26 lines moving through the alphabet, starting with A and going through Z. I did not try my hand at this one. But you can see an example here: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/alphabet_games_1484213

Other examples of this can be found in Psalm 119 and Provers 31. Of course it’s only in the Hebrew version that you can see this progression in the Hebrew alphabet.

  

Then there's The Golden Shovel



This is a much more recent version of the acrostic. It was created by National Book Award winning US poet Terrance Hayes in 2010. In a Golden Shovel you take a line, or lines, from someone else’s writing, and use each of their words as the end-words of each line in your poem. In the example below, I used a line from Robert Frost’s The Road Not Taken, one of my favorite poems. 

Once when it was just me, myself and I
I dug out a box of pictures I took
back in my college days, and thought over the
choices I'd made and how this one or that one
would have changed things more or less.
Then I happily realized the road I’d traveled
brought no regrets – and I’m ready for whatever else might come on by

 

There you have it - my short overview of acrostics. What do you think? Were any of these formats new to you? Leave a comment to be entered in a drawing for a chance to win a book of your choice.

And if anyone wants to try their hand at writing their own acrostic, I'll give a $10 gift card to one of the authors of those as well. 

 

15 comments:

  1. I love this, Winnie! What a great exercise for any wordsmith! I especially liked your golden shovel - it's so inspiring, and from one of my favorite poems, also.

    I would try my hand at one, but my plate is full today...I'll have to take a break later and see what happens in acrostic land. :-)

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    1. That's a favorite of mine, too, Jan. I have it printed on a magnet on my refrigerator. I consider being an author the Road Less Traveled

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  2. Winnie here (at my daughter's and can't remember my login)
    Glad you liked the post Jan, but I'm definitely no poet!! (as must be obvious by now) Hope you do have time to try your hand later - I'm sure you can come up with better examples

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  3. Sweater
    Election
    Pumpkin
    Thanksgiving
    Equinox
    Mums
    Blanket
    Education
    Roaring

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  4. I think, maybe, I'm not all that smart. Just a suspicion. Cool post, Winnie

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    1. Such modesty from such a fabulous writer!! Wait, that's inspiration!
      Modesty, thy name is Mary
      Articulate, artful and full of witty humor
      Really, her spirit and books are equally bright
      You just can't find many better

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  5. I studied this in college, so it's been a while for me. I'm getting ready for ACFW
    the conference, so I'll take a rain check and see what I can come up with, Winnie!

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  6. For a writer, this is better than Sudoku! Thanks, Winnie. Your posts are always informative.

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  7. Wow, Winnie, I'm amazed! You asked if any of the formats are new? Almost all of them! I'm keeping this post to try when I have a little more time. Thanks for sharing!!

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  8. Wow! I learned so much! I'd never heard of any of those, except the regular version.

    Please enter me in both drawings! Here's my attempt:
    Always
    Buying
    Books?
    Yes!

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