Wednesday, October 3, 2018

Is This Idea Book Worthy?

by guest blogger @jillkemerer
You have a great idea—it probably came to you last night as you were falling asleep or yesterday afternoon while driving home from soccer practice. The hyped-up feeling running through your veins proves the concept is awesome, and you’re itching to start writing the story.

This is it! My best idea yet! No editor will be able to turn it down. Readers will rave. It will hit bestseller lists. I have to write it immediately.

Who cares that you’re halfway through a slower-than-molasses draft you actually dread opening every time you sit down to write? Or that you have seven or eight other stories clamoring for attention in your head? This idea must be put front and center. Now!

Whoa-ho-ho there. Hold up, Lassie. I’ve been there. Really, I have. And before you open your laptop and start pouring the story onto the page, take a big step back. It’s time to be really honest with yourself and ask yourself a key question.

Is this idea book worthy?

Duh! Of course it is. Didn’t you just hear me say bestseller lists??

I heard you. Loud and clear. I’m guessing at one time you were equally as enthusiastic about the idea for the story you’re currently working on. So why abandon it?

I’m not abandoning it. I’m setting it aside for now and will finish it after this one.

Bad move. It’s all too easy to end up with a dozen unfinished manuscripts because we’ve chased a new idea.

In order to be a successful author, you need to finish books. This means you have to write the entire manuscript, look at the plot with a critical eye, make necessary story changes, revise it, and edit it. If you get in the habit of quitting a work-in-progress (WIP) whenever a “better” idea comes along, you’re not developing the skills you need.

There’s a rhythm to a book. The more complete manuscripts you draft, the more natural it becomes to tell a compelling story. And you’ll gain skills to help you develop future ideas, because you’ll remember the spots where you floundered in the past. You’ll be on the lookout to avoid those flimsy areas in the future.

Finish the current book before you dive into the new one. Let this new idea breathe and grow legs. If it’s book worthy, it will.

At Helping Writers Become Authors, K.M. Weiland wrote an excellent article, “4 Steps for How to Turn an Idea Into a Story that Rocks.” She talks about giving the idea a safe place to incubate.

“If you want to see an idea develop, make space for it within your life. If you stuff it way back in some dusty corner of your brain, your subconscious might occasionally bat it back at you. But if you want it to grow, hold it in your mind’s eye. Don’t force it. Don’t dictate what it must or must not do. But watch it.
Deep-dive into the dream zone and just let the idea roll around. See what it has to offer. Sometimes you’ll come to what seems the end of its potential, only to have a new fragment of a new idea glom onto the first one and evolve into something new. If that happens often enough, presto-chango, you’ve got yourself a butterfly.” ~K.M. Weiland
While you’re working on your current project, allow time for the new idea’s story elements to come to you. If you’re taking a walk or in line for coffee, let your mind wander. Jot down any details that come to you.

When you have enough details, you’ll be ready to explore the following questions.

What genre do you think the idea will fit into?

If it’s a romance, do you know who the hero and heroine will be? If it’s not a romance, who is the main character?

Genre is important because readers have expectations when they purchase your book. If you’re writing a romantic suspense, you need to make sure you have plenty of danger. If you’re writing women’s fiction, you need secondary characters to challenge the heroine’s beliefs. It’s easier to brainstorm possible ways to ramp these up before your start writing.

What’s the story about?

Can you wrap it up with a one-sentence summary? Example: When an unemployed actress gets custody of her niece, she takes a job preparing taxes and must choose between the accountant she’s falling for and her dreams of Broadway.

If you can’t summarize it, that’s okay. You might not know enough about the story yet, but at some point, you’ll need to be able to clarify it.

Are the stakes high enough?

Why can’t she have both the Broadway career AND the accountant? Is raising the niece only possible in the current setting? What’s really keeping her and the accountant apart? What does he want? How can these things directly oppose her dreams? And most importantly, what do these characters have to lose?

These types of questions deepen the conflicts and produce more nuanced, page-turning books for readers.

Will readers care about this story?

This is a tough question to be objective about. We automatically assume readers will care because we’re excited, but it’s not always the case. The story must have tension for the reader to keep turning the page. Whether you’re a plotter or a pantser, continuously find ways to raise the stakes!

When a new idea seems to be growing in my mind over the course of time, I know it’s book worthy. My initial concept always changes as I answer the above questions, and it should. My imagination finds ways to expand the initial idea into a higher stakes novel that will have a better chance at grabbing a reader’s attention and holding it until the end.

How do you determine if an idea is book worthy? I’d love to hear your tips!

I’m giving away one copy (paperback for US residents, ebook for international) of Wyoming Christmas Quadruplets. Leave a comment!

Next week I’m taking over the Love Inspired Readers and Authors Facebook group. I’d love to have you join us! I’m giving away books, and we’re talking about our favorite things from Monday through Friday. Click on Love Inspired Readers and Authors (linked) and “Join Group.”

A nanny at Christmastime…

Will she find love in this Wyoming Cowboys novel?

Six weeks on a ranch caring for quadruplets—aspiring nurse Ainsley Draper’s prepared for a busy Christmas. When the children’s handsome uncle opens the door, her task gets extra complicated. Marshall Graham is upholding his promise to look after his twin sister, the babies’ mom. But as family loyalty clashes with new love, will the perfect present include a future with Ainsley?


***Mindy butting in here with news that Jill's latest release, Wyoming Christmas Quadruplets, has hit Publisher's Weekly Best Seller list! Congratulations, Jill!***
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Jill Kemerer is a multi-published author of Christian romance novels. Her essentials include coffee, fluffy animals, a stack of books and taking long nature walks. Jill resides in Ohio with her husband and two almost-grown children. She loves connecting with readers, so please visit her website, jillkemerer.com, and sign up for her newsletter.






59 comments:

  1. Good morning, Seekerville! Coffee and tea are on and, in honor of October, we've got some pumpkin spice muffins and cider donuts. Yum!

    Jill, thank you for joining us today and allowing us to celebrate with you. I still love that cover. Just look at all those precious babies! No wonder it made the best seller list. Babies sell! Especially cute little Christmas babies. I cannot wait to read this story.

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    1. Thank you so much, Mindy, for hosting me today and for the shout-out!! I am blessed by your friendship!!

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  2. Good morning Jill,
    I'm one of your goal-setting buddies, regrettably off the rails right now due to ACFW Nashville and some altered goals.
    I can really relate to this post. Wrote something I thought was marketable, and may still be, but came home from conference with a headful of changes that still need to be made. This story has gripped me and I WILL make them.
    I confess to getting ideas, lots of them, but I don't abandon current work to pursue them. If they're valid, they'll still be there.
    Mindy, pumpkin spice muffins are the best! I put chocolate chips in mine instead of raisins. Also love cider doughnuts, we have several places near me that make them fresh.
    Jill, looked for the book last week and it wasn't in any of my local stores, will try again.
    I'm on fellow Pelican author Kathy Neely's blog today, www.KathleenNeely.com, dissecting my conference experience.
    Kathy Bailey
    In for the long haul

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    1. Kathy, I just can't bring myself to ruin that amazingly wonderful pumpkin flavor by adding chocolate. Don't get me wrong, I love chocolate, just not with my pumpkin. I want those autumnal flavors to shine.

      I popped over and read your blog post. Loved hearing about your conference experience. So glad you were able to make it.

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    2. Mindy, to each her own. Go Pumpkin! There's a quick-lube place in my area that offers a Pumpkin Spice Oil Change, may check it out.

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    3. Um, yeah, so the brow went up on that one, Kathy. Either they decided to get in on the pumpkin spice craze and just throw that in there or they'll give you a pumpkin spice something to enjoy while they're changing your oil. If it's the latter, count me in.

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    4. Kathy, conferences derail me every time! That's okay--we go to learn, and sometimes that means making changes. :)
      BTW, I'm dying for some cinnamon sugar donuts from the apple orchard. Doesn't that sound delish??

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    5. Mindy, I'm with you on not mixing my pumpkin and chocolate! :)

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  3. Love, love that cover!

    I'm sort of dealing w/this right now. I have a book that the rough draft is finished. But boy is it rough! I also have an idea that I believe is better and more marketable. I keep going back and forth on what to do. Trudge through the painful revisions (and they will be PAINFUL) or work on my new story?

    I decided to go with the revisions, but move as fast as possible. No dragging it out allowed.

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    1. Thanks, Connie! I have no problem setting aside a draft to work on a new book. Having some time between writing a draft and revising it helps keep your eyes fresh. My real issue is when we abandon a draft halfway through the original writing it to work on a new idea! Best wishes on your projects!!

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    2. Marketable is always something to consider, Connie. But then there are those books of our hearts.

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  4. Hi Jill,
    Quads...I can't imagine knowing all that it takes to care for one baby, but this adorable cover has pulled me right in and I can't wait to read it! Congrats on making the Publisher's Weekly Bestseller List, that's awesome!

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    1. I know, Tracey! I cannot even fathom having four babies at once. Or even two. Oy.

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    2. I can't imagine, either!! Thankfully, I was able to research using YouTube and books. It was fun! Thank you so much, Tracey!!

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    3. My mom had twins after have three kids already, but some how she always managed everything, even get us ready for church every Sunday morning and having our dinner in the oven for when we got home. Mom's of multiples are amazing!

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    4. Moms of multiples truly ARE amazing, Tracey!

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  5. FIRST!!! HUGE CONGRATS ON MAKING THE PUBLISHER'S WEEKLY BESTSELLER LIST!!!! I AM SO STINKIN' PROUD OF YOU, CUPCAKE!!!!!

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    1. Ruthie!! Thank you!! I am still pinching myself--and now I want to always be referred to as Cupcake!! LOVE it!!

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    2. I'm joining in the celebration, too!! Congrats again, Jill!!

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    3. Thanks, Missy!! I really appreciate it!

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  6. Jill, I haven't found your book up here yet but Canada's always at least a week behind putting them out in Walmart. I can certainly imagine needing a nanny with quadruplets! And that is one gorgeous cover. I agree with you and KM Weiland, it's best to wait and let a new idea percolate in our subconscious before we decide to pursue it and waste time on something that doesn't have enough wow appeal. Usually it needs bigger stakes, at least in romantic suspense. And here's to unadulterated pumpkin spice lattes and muffins! :) I confess I'm a Starbucks afficionado purist like you!

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    1. Yay, Laurie. Cheers to pumpkin spice! Yet while it is best to percolate, the lure of new-story love can be so hard to resist.

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    2. Thanks so much, Laurie!! I feel like we need a Starbucks and pumpkin muffin date--even if it's in spirit only! Haha!

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    3. Hey Jill, I'm up for a virtual Starbucks date anytime! :)

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  7. Second... this is a great post. This is such valuable information. I have stories in my head all the time and it is so tempting to go off on tangents... but the self-discipline and restraint that makes us finish one story is huge... and then my reward is playing with new stories! And because this tends to be a hurry up and wait business, it's always got built-in timeframes to work on other things while waiting on approvals.

    Which makes my reward time that much sweeter!

    Well done, Jill!!!

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    1. Ruthy, what forms of pumpkin spice do you have up for sale at the farm these days?

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    2. I agree, Ruthie, self-discipline is very rewarding. Even if the story we finish doesn't ultimately sell, it's still worth writing! Thanks so much!

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    3. Oh, pumpkin spice is marvelous, isn't it??? No spice except for spiced cider.... but so many pretty pumpkins!:)

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  8. Hi Jill:

    "It's never the idea. It's always the execution."


    That's what a writing teacher told me years ago.

    "Nora Roberts could turn any idea into a best seller,"" she went on to say.

    "Learn to execute. The ideas will take care of themselves."

    I started reading your "Wyoming Christmas Quadruplets" last night and what I experienced was great execution.

    Hero and heroine get together in the first scene.
    Lots of conflict.
    A perfect situation for the hero and heroine to always have a reason to be in the same scene.
    Immediately sympathetic characters.
    Backstory brought into play quickly in the natural flow of the narrative.

    Then there's lots questions and answers causing readers to turn pages:

    What's wrong with the sister?
    Why is the hero taking care of the infants?
    Where is the setting?
    Why are the characters there?
    Where is the babies' father?
    Will the nurse stay?
    Will the mother let the nurse stay?

    I think most editors would say there is nothing romantic about taking care of quadruplets and most writers would say it might work but it would be too hard to execute.

    However, the idea would sure make great cover art. Indeed, that's the kind of assignment the artists in the marketing department would fight over getting. (I know, I've been there.)

    So far, "Wyoming Christmas Quadruplets" is a text book example of excellent execution. It kept me up to two o'clock this morning and even then the spirit was willing but the flesh was not. :)

    I'm taking a writing course by Margaret Atwooed at this time and she says when your WIP is bogging down, even 100 to 150 pages into it, think about changing the person it's written in or the tense from present to past, or vice versa. She has done this herself with best sellers. Again: it's in the execution.

    James Patterson says in his course that he edits his books six to seven times. Not to make them publishable but to make them best sellers. Execution, again.

    Enough shop talk. It's time to get back to enjoying and learning from (a two fer) "Wyoming Christmas Quadruplets".

    I have your book but I sure love to win an autographed book mark.

    Thanks for your post today.

    Vince

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    1. Vince, you beat me to it. I can't wait to read this book. Now with your glowing recommendation it just got bumped to the top of my tbr pile. If it's half as good as the previous two books in the series, I may have some late nights.

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    2. Wow, Vince, you sure know how to make my day! Thank you!! And thank you for sharing all the writing advice by the greats that you've learned. We can all learn from them! Bless you!!

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  9. Jill, we're so glad you're here today! A perfect time for a guest blog post as well as a celebration of the bestseller list!

    I write so linearly that I don't often have ideas that pop up and try to interrupt. But if I do, I usually just jot them down.

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    1. Hi Missy!! A notepad and pen is always the best way to deal with an idea! Thanks!

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  10. Congrats for being on Publisher's Weekly Best Seller list!
    I have loved your cover since my first glimpse and am so anxious to read your book. Please enter me in your giveaway and THANKS!

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    1. Jackie, we should all be lucky enough to have a cover like that.

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    2. Babies! I don't know nothin' 'bout birthin' no babies....

      Now I must write a story with quints!!! ;)

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    3. Jackie, the cover artists outdid themselves. I adore this cover!!

      Mindy and Ruthie--yep, cute babies, who doesn't want more of those??

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  11. I find I often have multiple story ideas in my head at the same time. Why oh why does a new one hit usually when neck-deep in writing another? :-) I keep a notebook close to hot down ideas so I can come back to them later. Since I am a nanowrimo writer, I know I won't be on this wip for long anyway and can focus on the new idea pretty quickly.

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    1. Amy, it does seem that new ideas pop into our heads when we're I the throes of another story. Sometimes, those ideas just don't like to wait until it's their turn. Good idea to simply write them all down.

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    2. I know, Amy! I keep an idea notebook. I just add to the ideas as more comes to me. It works! It won't be long before you're in NaNo--yay!

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  12. Jill, what a great post! I have had those ideas pop into my head that make my heart beat fast with the excitement of it. But, you're right. We need to finish the current book first. It can feel hard. Tedious. I love the idea of letting the new story idea breathe in my mind and heart. Then, when the time is right, I can really explore it.

    I always write down new story ideas and keep them in a folder. Then, when I'm ready to begin a new story, I have a few ideas to choose from. :)

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    1. Hi Jeanne! You're so smart to organize your story ideas. Then you can find them all in the same spot!

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    2. Jeanne, I used to do that. I think I still have it somewhere. I'll have to pull it out. Someday when these other stories aren't knocking around my head.

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  13. Welcome back, Jill! I am often dumping ideas into my "Maybe Someday" file and getting back to the story at hand. When a new idea is clanging loudly in my head, I sit for a few minutes and write everything I can think of about the story as fast as I can, and then when it's purged from my mind, I plunk it into my "Maybe Someday" file and get back to work. When it's time to look for new story ideas, I open that file and see what's there. :)

    And sometimes I read through what's in that file and wonder "What were you thinking?" LOL!

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    1. I love this idea, Erica!! We should all have a Maybe Someday file--great advice!

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  14. Thank you so much for your post! It`s tough to let the ideas sit until I have time to flesh it out. I keep a notebook in my car and another one in the house so that when those ideas come I just jot them down thinking I`ll eventually get to it at another point.

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    1. So smart, Lee-Ann! I have a slim notebook in my purse at all times. You never know when an idea will hit!

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  15. Even when I'm not ready to develop an idea or begin to write it, I type up from the notebooks I keep with me all thoughts and create a binder with a hard copy of what I have so far. I also add the temporary title to my master to-do list, so I won't forget that story is waiting to be written. They may be in this stage for a while. At the moment I have 3 novels I have finished but still polishing. 3 more adult novels being written now at various stages all 3 a different genre so I don't get confused. 2 middle grade children's chapter books in progress and another waiting for me to start. I love having more than one because if I get a little block on one, I can keep writing. None of them are cast aside totally just until I can work out the problems.

    Of course part of my problem is from the chronic vertigo that affects my ability to think. I have a feeling that when my day to be published arrives I will need to have all books in the series written a head of time.

    By the way I bought your book last month just haven't been able to get to it yet.

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    1. Good for you having 3 finished novels, Wilani!! Woohoo!! And I love that you have other books going on as well. I can't imagine how hard it is to have vertigo. I give you a lot of credit for writing through it. :)

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    2. Wilani, that's great that you've got so many books written and ready to go. Boo on the vertigo, though. That must make things challenging. Keep up the good work, though.

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  16. Jill, I'm really late getting here today as I worked both my jobs today. But it's a good post. Please put me in the drawing for your book. Love the cover.

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    1. Ouch, both jobs? Hope you get some rest! Thank you!!

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  17. Jill, love your latest...and all those babies! And it made the Publishers Weekly bestseller's list! Woot! Thrilled for you.

    Great post! Thank you!

    I'm dashing for to the Georgia Romance Writers Moonlight & Magnolias Conference but wanted to say "HI" and "Congrats!"

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    1. Thank you SO much, Debby!! I appreciate it!! Have a wonderful conference!!

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  18. Hi Jill! And welcome back to Seekerville!

    This is a great post. I suffer from that shiny-new-idea syndrome occasionally, but like you said, I've learned to give it space to grow while I finish my WIP.

    When a new idea hits me, I spend just enough time on it to figure out if its viable, then I put it on the back of the stove to simmer while I concentrate on the book that's due next.

    Right now I have...let's see...four stories in their pots. If I can make time to write them, I think they'll all be good ones. :-)

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  19. Great post, Jill! I'm not a writer, but I love reading all these fascinating posts. Congratulations on your new book and making the PW best seller list! Throw my name in the hat for a paperback copy of your book!

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  20. As a reader I love reading all of the advice shared at Seekerville. I would appreciate being entered into your drawing.
    Blessings!

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