Wednesday, January 27, 2021

What's Your Inspiration? Students, Craft Books, and a Whole Lot of Thinking

 On Monday, Amanda Wen shared some terrific sources for plot ideas. I've mentioned before that my story inspirations can come from the oddest little tidbits. Sometimes blog topics arise that way too.


Most of you know that in addition to writing, I teach English Language Arts to middle schoolers. This past year, I was also participating in a PhD study regarding the reading habits of boys. Those two things converged this past week in a way that sparked a blog idea.

I was reading an excerpt from a short story by Jack London with my 7th graders. I was struggling to focus on the text - too much on my mind, too tired, too stressed. I wondered, if I was struggling with lack of interest in the text, how were my students doing with it? So I posed the question for reflection and discussion. 

Their answers really intrigued me as both a teacher (connection to the PhD study) and as a writer (author's craft).


The question I posed was whether they were engaged with the story or if something about it had just made their brains shut down and/or made them tune out?

As expected, my struggling readers, well, they struggled. So most of them said they shut down or tuned out.

But a core group - of mostly boys - were totally engaged by the story. When I asked them why, their answer spoke to writer me. They said the author's use of language was what caught their attention. They felt like they were in the story experiencing it along with the character. Some of them also mentioned being intrigued by the descriptive words (which were defined in footnotes) because they learned something new.

At the time, I decided that Writer Cate needed to spend some time reflecting on that and what it meant for her craft. Then, over the weekend I stumbled across an article that focused on word choice and a writer's responsibility to make effective use of the arsenal of words available to us.

On some level, we're all aware that the words we choose define our voice. If we've been writing in the same genre for awhile, we've probably (consciously or not) adopted a tone suitable to our genre. Someone writing contemporary romantic suspense is not going to be using the same vocabulary as an author writing about Regency England or another writing Biblical fiction. Just like our covers are so different in the ways they reflect our chosen genre, so should our word choice be.

And that got me thinking about craft books.

(Sorry. My brain hops all over the place.)

There was a direct connection. The thoughts about word choice reminded me of a craft book I picked up years ago - Word Painting: A Guide to Writing More Descriptively by Rebecca McClanahan.



The cover is a bit faded, but the interior is rather pristine - because I never finished reading it.

That's the problem I have with craft books. I start out all gung ho, but then my brain fires up with the new ideas I learned, and I rush off to a manuscript to try them out. More often than not, the book sits neglected until something (like a class discussion) prompts me to pick it up again.

So I thought we could discuss craft books a bit today. I know people have very differing opinions about them. Some people swear by them. Ruthy has sworn off them (as she's only too happy to tell you.)
I confess. I'm a craft book junkie. I buy A LOT of them. I don't read them all, but I feel good knowing they're on my shelf waiting for the day something strikes my fancy. I like to pick them up from time to time and glance through them, maybe read a pertinent section.

There are some I have read in full and often reread. Anne LaMott's Bird by Bird comes to mind. That is the book that gave me the courage to be a writer because she let us know that real writers fail, and hate what they write, and just keep working. And when they're overwhelmed, they take it bird by bird.




So tell me, do you collect craft books? (And if you do, do you actually read them?)

Do you have a favorite?

Or do you abhor "craft" books and learn your craft from reading all the wonderful books in the genre you write?

Or something else?

I'm also celebrating this week because Texas Witness Threat made the Publishers Weekly Bestseller List, so I'm giving away a copy of the snake book to one person who mentions in the comments that they'd like to be in the drawing (print or ebook, your choice).




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  1. I’d like to be in the drawing. Print, please. Thank you.

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  2. I love that my notoriety made it into the blog, LOL!

    It is true, I'd rather write than read... it was my attitude as a soccer coach, too... Practice, practice, practice... I just figured reading about soccer wasn't polishing skills... so I just took that application to my writing career. I think, though, to be absolutely honest, I love what I do so much that I do it. And I know that's not universal. But I do read non-fiction occasionally... right now I'm reading about the biggest slave sale in history, The Weeping Time... Heartbreaking and gripping. For me, reading about man's inhumanity to man helps me develop plots, but moreover it helps me develop character and emotion because people can be wretchedly cruel in big and little ways. And amazingly nice. :)

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    1. I'm not sure our attitudes are all that different. I like to read some of the craft books because they get me thinking, but then I'm impatient and want to apply it.

      Ruthy, part of this study we were doing had data about reading preferences by gender. My husband read non-fiction almost exclusively. Try as he would, he couldn't lose himself in novels. I do read non-fiction, but again - in pieces. I rarely read it straight through.

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  3. I do like craft books like "Write Your Novel from the Middle" by James Scott Bell and anything from KM Weiland, but I easily fall into the trap of reading more about writing than doing any actual writing, so I have to be careful not to get so engrossed in the mechanics that I miss the doing LOL :)

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    1. Good morning, Glynis. That book and Superstructure are actually ones I have thoroughly read and frequently refer back to, especially when starting a new book. I'm always focused on figuring out the mirror moment.

      That trap is easy to fall into. Good luck avoiding it.

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    2. I got a lot out of "Write Your Novel from the Middle." Plus it was short. Another thing I liked. :)

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  4. Cate, I love this post so much! I, too, am a craft book junkie. I never walk out of McKay's without visiting my favorite section. Bird by Bird is one of the absolute best, but I think my favorite right now is By Cunning and Craft by Peter Selgin. Another book I read every year is Art & Fear by Bayles and Orland. It doesn't address craft, really, but it inspires the artist in whatever modality to create despite the setbacks and the struggles. A couple that are on my TBR shelf are The Successful Novelist by David Morrell (author of First Blood and creator of the Rambo franchise) and Writing Down the Bones by Natalie Goldberg. Oh, and a friend just let me borrow Story Genius by Lisa Cron, and I can't wait to dive into it.

    One reason I love to read craft books is because I will learn of a certain atrocity that supposedly will mark a book for death (lookin' at you and your adverbs, Stephen King), and bear it in mind as I read. It's fascinating to me that every single book breaks the "rules," so I try to pay attention to how the rule is broken, how often, and how carefully, and if the infraction really does pull me, as the reader, out of the story or ruin it for me. I just find it all so fascinating. Thanks again for this great post and please enter me in the drawing for the snake book! :-)

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    1. Yay!!! A fellow craft book junkie! I like Natalie Goldberg's book. I bought that around the time I got Bird by Bird. You've mentioned a couple of others that are new to me, so woo hoooo, I get to go book shopping! Thank you.

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    2. Rachel, I like Art & Fear too!!!

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  5. These are some great thoughts, Cate!

    I love to read craft books. I schedule time to read them - fifteen minutes just after lunch. Reading in small chunks helps me digest the information, even if I don't finish very many in a year!

    Right now I'm reading "The Breakout Novelist" by Donald Maass for the second time, and I found a topic where I disagree with him (gasp!) That will be the subject of my February post!

    I also keep a few others on my shelf for reference. I haven't read them all the way through (they're on the TBR list) but I do pick them up when I run across something new in a podcast or blog and want to learn more about it. In fact, I often read a non-fiction book that way - I browse the index for the topic I want.

    And that brings me to alternatives to craft books - there are some great resources through podcasts and blogs (like Seekerville!) that add to my knowledge base. Sometimes they spark new thoughts, sometimes I just skim through. I listen to a podcast once or twice a week.

    So I'm not sure you'd call me a craft book junkie. I don't buy many, but I do buy ones that are recommended to me and I (eventually) read them. Maybe that makes me a craft book aficionado?

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    1. Jan, I’ve not read The Breakout Novelist, but I want to now and am looking forward to your February post!

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    2. I have The Breakout Novelist and the accompanying workbook somewhere on my shelves,Jan.
      I like the term aficionado MUCH better than junkie.

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    3. Jan, your 15 min read after lunch is a great idea! Thanks for the tip.

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  6. Mary Cate, I do the same thing when I'm trying to read a craft book. I put it down because I want to rush off and execute what I've just learned. In other words, I'd rather be doing than reading about it.

    I used to have an extensive collection of craft books because I felt I was supposed to have them. That I would fail without them. But then I never read them. So, when we made our big move a few years ago, the majority of them went to Half-Price Books. The funny thing is that the few I did keep are simply collecting dust. That's one thing nice about Seekerville. I can still learn about the craft of writing, but in minutes instead of days. Which means I can go and implement what I just learned right away. And that makes me happy.

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    1. I shudder to think about moving all my books!!!!!

      Mindy, you made me realize that how much time I spend with craft books may be inveresely proportional to my need to procrastinate!

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  7. Interesting post. I have bought a few craft books that meet my specific needs, such as "Showing, Not Telling". I have found the internet to be most helpful with most of my short comings, which leads me to helpful books full of insights, then before you know it, I have a shelf full of books, partially read, but they are there if and when I need them.
    I use them as reference to trouble shooting and don't usually spend any more time in them than necessary. I find myself ALWAYS trying to get back to writing...I can't even carry on a conversation with people anymore without finding myself thinking of parts of that conversation I could use in a book! Would you call that a writing obsession?

    Living, learning and having the time of my life, especially when I am in my creative bubble!


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    1. Please enter me in the "Snake Book" drawing!

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    2. Lynne, your comment is just bubbling with your joy in writing. That makes me smile. Isn't it wonderful to have something we feel so good about. Yes, I do think you have a writing obsession. How lucky you are!

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  8. Ohmygoodness, Cate, you make me feel better. I have a number of craft books I've purchased over the years and have yet to read, including the two you highlighted in your post. I've started some, read through a few and re-read even fewer. I've forbidden myself to buy any more until I read the ones I have. LOL.

    After reading your post, though, I've realized I really do need to read both of the ones you highlighted. They are moving higher on my priorities for my days.

    I'd love to be in the drawing for your book. :)

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    1. Hi Jeanne! Bird by Bird is just fun. Anne LaMott has such an engaging voice. I'm determined to read (or at least skim) Word Painting too.
      Glad I made you feel better!

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  9. Cate, this is a great post. I love reading craft books and have a whole bookshelf full, many purchased through Writer's Digest Book Club years ago. Many have never been opened, although I will probably look through them at some point. It will be interesting to see what might have changed in the writing world since some of those older books! I have been collecting more recent craft books that I do read as I get them. Many of these are recommended by people in Seekerville. One I am just finishing is 12 Fatal Flaws of Fiction Writing. I think it will be useful as it has checklists at the end of each section. No need to enter me in the drawing. I have the book. I think it will be up next in my very large TBR pile. I look forward to reading it.

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    1. I have a bunch of those Writer's Digest books too, Sandy. That's an interesting point about how advice will have changed.

      Thanks for buying my book! I hope you enjoy it.

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  10. Hi Cate, I LOVE craft books. :) I just bought one last night...lol. There are a few I keep going back to - The Story Equation and GMC (for starting a new MS), The Emotional Thesaurus and Julie Lessman's Romance-ology 101. I have some of the other books you mentioned but haven't read them yet - Bird by Bird, On Writing. Then I have books on specific genres and a bunch of others.
    I have a goal to read at least one new craft book this year (which I already have in my growing pile of craft books). I'm so not a non-fiction reader, but I can read a writing craft book without too much turmoil. :) I've been known to read one or two while camping...

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    1. Hi Lee-Ann. I love the Emotional Thesaurus,. It helps when my brain is too tired. On Writing is actually the only one of Stephen King's books that I've read. Kind of funny.

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    2. GMC should be on everyone's reference shelf, IMHO! At least every romance author should have it. Just my two cents!

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  11. Hi Cate:

    I wish I had you for my seventh grade teacher! Novels and short stories! Those had to wait to high school. All I got in English was vocabulary, spelling tests, and sentence diagramming. No fun stuff at all.

    I did like the hour of geography every day. It vicariously took me out of that classroom for an hour and I loved it; however, on slecond thought, it may have been just the escape I loved.

    When I got to high school we had to read, "Middlemarch", "The Mayor of Casterbridge", "Julius Caesar", and "Pride and Prejudice". Thank God for P&P which I liked so much I read all of Austen's other novels even her "Lazy Susan" epistolary novel. (A lot of early novels were written that way including "Pamela" which might be the first English novel.)

    About boys, spelling, math, and science, well, a lot has to do with what boys are supposed to like. If the class was reading "Little Women" I'm not sure boys would like any of it. Boys like action or situations where they are 'one-upping' the adults around them.

    As a youg reader I was blessed when my aunt gave me a book club subscription for a new book every month. What I liked was the vocabulary was age appropriate and when challenging words were used the author was wise enough to make those hard words understandable by the context or explaining the same thing in words the reader would have known. This was done without being stilted. (That is no 'scientist's daughter' to explain things to so the reader could also understand them. Cliché, bad writing.)

    I like to read the best of everything. When I started to read Science Fiction, I found a list of the 25 best stories and read them first. I did the same for Mysteries, Westerns, Romances, even advertising copywriting text books.

    I love craft books and I'm sure I have all the top books somewhere. I found in all these different genres that there really were just a few, maybe 4 to 8 books, that you really needed to read -- with the remainder being only somewhat helpful. Really, in all these many craft books I am happy to find even just one or two ideas that I am going to add to how I write by habit and don't have to remind myself of as I write.

    I think the most important, of maybe 100 writing craft books I've read, is "The Power of POV". In a way, I wish I had read this book first but then I probably wound not think this if I had actually read it first.

    I'm so happy "The Snake Book" make the best seller list! I did buy "Texas Witness Threat", and started reading it last night about midnight and I was still reading it at 2 am when the spirit was still willing but the body was not.

    Talk about today's topic and being apropos! When I read the opening sentence to "Snake" it was about the heroine worrying about stepping into puddles and ruining her good shoes! I thought, "That's an opening for women". That's not life and death to a man.

    I, as a guy, would have opened with gun shots and the snarky heroine saying, "Well, they are trying to kill me…again. This is another fine mess I've gotten myself into. Shoes can be replaced!"

    But, that's just my voice, which I think is more like Mary's.

    Next, I discover the hero is a Texas Ranger! "Why isn't he on the cover?" Not only is he big and handsome, but he is a world class marksman with his pistol. All perfect bull eyes in rapid fire. That's a hero for everyone both boys and girls. It only took a couple of sentences and I was hooked.

    Sure enough: I'd like to see a cover that had that Texas Ranger holding the snake at arms length while the heroine is bravely holding a burlap bag to place the snake inside. (They are going to release the snake later where it is safe to do so.)

    Well, I think that is probably enough…if not too much. :)

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    1. Addendum: That's'Lady Susan' -- so much for trying to sound erudite! :(

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    2. Vince, I'm honored I managed to keep you awake for two hours at that time of night!
      True story, on my way to get the Covid vaccine last week, I slipped and fell into the roadway and all I could think was if this happened before I wrote that scene, I would have described it differently!

      Somewhere in my house I have a copy of Pamela. I bought it many moons ago when I learned it was likely the first English novel. It felt appropriate that I own it. I have not read it though.

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  12. What an interesting post. :) I would love to be enter in the drawing, print please

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  13. What an amazing post Please enter me in the drawing as I Love reading print books! Thank you for sharing!

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  14. Congrats on the success of your "snake book"....I would love to be in the drawing for an E copy. Thank you.

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  15. AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    YAY ON THE BESTSELLER LIST!!!!!!
    I do NOT read craft books. Um...trying to think. I read Stephen King's On Writing. An interesting look into a truly ODD mind but mostly what I read there just sort of confirmed what I already knew.
    I consider well written novels to be craft books. And I don't exactly study them so much as notice what engages me. Emotion, always.
    Making me feel. Making me live in the skin of the character and feel what she feels. That seems to be the fundamental craft goal.
    Surely I've read more craft books than that?
    Keep in mind it took me ten years to get my first book published. So just maybe...a few craft books wouldn't have hurt me.

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  16. Oh, and vocabulary....
    After Erica wrote her Regency we talked a little about the difference in the language.
    No longer were the words, Dad gum it, My pleasure Little Missy, boy howdy, and I reckon, going to fit in her books.
    :)

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    1. Mary, I was thinking of Erica's Regency books as I wrote this.

      And since it took me even longer to get published, I think we can take the number of craft books read out of the equation for success.

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    2. Hahahaha! Cate, I am totally down with both of you on this one... and yet now, we're here! And staying. :) That old Nora Roberts saying about writers..."Success doesn't go to the most talented. It goes to the ones who do not quit."

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    3. I remember that convo, Mary! Now my work is peppered with "Why must you always vex me?" and "Are you quizzing me?" and "I shall quite like to meet him." :)

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    4. I believe that writing Regencies is facing a learning curve that is perpendicular. For me, at least, reading a Regency is like watching a ballet: no one in it can be clumsy. You can't make even one clumsy mistake. Yet, when you get a Regency right, it is romance sublime.

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  17. Hi Cate, my favorite craft books are The Plot Whisperer by Martha Alderson and Goal, Motivation & Conflict by Debra Dixon. The GMC book taught me a lot and I'll never get rid of it! lol Please enter me in the drawing, I have a Kindle, but I love the print books better. Thank you!

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    1. Karen, I remember after I took a break from writing, when I came back everyone in the writing community was talking about GMC (because the book had just been published). I had NO idea what they were talking about.

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    2. Deb Dixon's GMC was the first writing book in my collection. I learned so much. Of course, at that time I knew so little. :)

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  18. I am so bad about reading craft books. I have read a few my editor insisted on, but other than that, I am like Mary. I learn by reading other fiction books and by writing. And by editing. So much editing.
    My biggest wish is that we weren't so scared of using "big" words. I've been told I need to use a five dollar word instead of a ten dollar one because readers aren't going to want to have to stop and think. But I learned all these words by reading. So, I guess I want to be able to do the same for someone else. :-)

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    1. Oh, I hate that advice, Amy. Isn't it interesting since it's just those big word that appealed to my boys!!!!

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  19. I would love to be in the drawing. Thank you for sharing.

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  20. I have a few craft books that I use constantly like the emotional thesaurus. I noticed I was starting to collect and not use so I stopped getting them, but I do have a few I use as reference for sure. I just moved to Texas I would love an opportunity to read a story about my new state.

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    1. Congrats on the move, Jeri. I've become much more selective about buying them, but I can't say I've stopped. Honestly, the pandemic keeping me out of bookstores has probably had more to do with it than any willpower!

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  21. I really need to delve into Word Painting. It's been recommended to me several times, and I haven't taken the leap to read it! Thanks for the prod! :)

    And many congrats on the "Snake Book" doing so well.

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    1. Thanks, Erica. And I should follow my own advice and read more of it. We can compare notes!

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  22. Anything Michael Hauge is read and reread! I also have Donald Maass's "The Breakout Novel Workbook" and have worked through it a number of times. I've written blogs on his tips and taught classes on his techniques. A great resource.

    The Writer's Journey is one of my favorites as well.

    Lots of other how-to resources in my personal library. Some read. Some not. But I like having the books in case I need them.

    Great blog topic!

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    1. I've spent more time listening to Michael Hauge in workshops although I do have his book. I agree, he's been an exceptional resource. I think it's safe to say, I just like having books. :)

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