Wednesday, April 5, 2023

Book Series Proposals


by Mindy Obenhaus

Each time I write a post, I ask myself where I’m at in my writing. What am I working on? Since I just turned a new series proposal, I thought I’d revisit my process for doing that because if you’re like I was, you hear of people proposing a book series, yet have no idea what that actually looks like. It can seem like an overwhelming task. So, I’m going to pull back the veil on my proposal process which, as you’ve probably figured out, can be different for everyone. Yet while the process may be different, the elements of the proposal remain the same.

Back when I first started writing, my goal was to get published. Of course, that didn’t happen overnight. I had a lot of learning to do first. About the craft and the business—which seems to be ever-changing. Nine years later, I realized my dream of becoming a published author. And a year or so after that, it was time for me to propose a book series.

“No problem,” I thought, clueless as to what a multi-book proposal might entail.

Off I went to work on the first story. Synopsis and first three chapters, just like the other books. I’ve got this.

But wait, how are these books going to be connected? Friends? Family? Location?

Once that was settled, it dawned on me that I should also consider things such as what time of year each story would take place and how weather might play a role. If I have drenching rains in one story and a wildfire due to dry conditions in a later story, a reasonable amount of time would have to pass between those two stories to make that fire believable.

After I wrapped my brain around those things, I was ready to write. Since I tend to be a linear writer, I write the first three chapters and synopsis on the first story before moving on to the short synopses of the other books in the series, though you might prefer to write the other outlines simultaneously. Whatever works best for you.

Thanks to my annoying detail-oriented tendencies, I soon found myself wondering how long those subsequent synopses should be. Are we talking back-cover copy type blurbs or something longer?

You might want to check with your agent or editor, but I say whatever it takes to give the editor a succinct idea of each story, while still giving them enough information to know if the story is going to work. A brief synopsis that includes these key elements—

  • Main character names, occupations and ages.
  • Goal, motivation and conflict for the main characters.
  • What’s at stake? (AKA what happens if the characters don’t achieve their goals?)
  • In a romance, what brings the hero and heroine together?
  • And what keeps them apart?

Yes, this can take a little time because you kinda need to get a feel for the characters, get to know them a little bit. At least I do. Blame it on the detail-oriented thing.

Once all of the synopses are complete, it’s time to assemble the proposal. Again, it’s always good to check with your agent or editor to see if there’s a particular format they prefer. I usually start with a cover page that has the working title of the first story, the working title for the series, my name and contact information and my agent’s name and contact info. 

The next page has my series working title at the top, followed by each of the proposed books and their brief synopsis. For the first book, I just state that the synopsis and first three chapters are attached.

Lastly, I add the synopsis and first three chapters of the first story in the series.

Developing a series is process that shouldn’t be rushed. The more you know, the clearer your vision will be to your editor and the more likely they will be to buy your proposal. And that’s what we want, right?

Speaking of series, the third installment of my Hope Crossing series, Loving the Rancher's Children, is set to release next month. But if you leave a comment, you’ll be entered to win an advance copy. (US mailing addresses only, please)



Award-winning author Mindy Obenhaus is passionate about touching readers with Biblical truths in an entertaining, and sometimes adventurous, manner. She lives on a ranch in Texas with her husband, two sassy pups, countless cattle, deer and the occasional coyote, mountain lion or snake. When she's not writing, she enjoys spending time with her grandchildren, cooking and watching copious amounts of the Hallmark Channel. Learn more at www.MindyObenhaus.com

26 comments:

  1. Interesting post, Mindy. I will have to save this. No need to put me in the drawing. I have this book pre-ordered from the bookstore where I work. I look forward to reading it.

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    1. Thanks for preordering, Sandy. I hope you enjoy the story.

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  2. Pitching a series for me is tricky because often books #2 and #3 change based on what happens in book one. How much flexibility do you have, Mindy? If your subsequent books take a turn from the proposal?

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    1. Mary, sometimes they do change a little, but if I had something that was a drastic turn, I think I would discuss the new idea with my editor. So far, I've only had slight changes to what I originally proposed.

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  3. Writing a series is a whole different ballgame, isn't it? I'm currently writing a connected series where the hero and heroine stay the same for all three books, with a slower-building romance. To add difficulty, the series is closely tied to the four stories that precede it, so all seven books (and now eight through ten) are connected.

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    1. Erica, that's a whole lot of moving parts. Enter the series bible, right? My head hurts just reading about your series.

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  4. I love series-- who doesn't-- but I never really thought about how to do a proposal for one. Thanks for sharing your knowledge and congrats on another book!

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  5. I love series but you've shown me just how much work there is to connect the different books. I missed reading The Cowgirl's Redemption but absolutely loved A Christmas Bargain. Looking forward to your May release! Hope you have a blessed Easter!

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    1. Thank you, Connie. Wishing you and yours a blessed Easter, as well.

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  6. Mindy, great points on building master docs for a series. I have a spreadsheet rather than a synopsis to keep my books in line. So many details to keep straight through multiple books!

    Thanks for the good info! Have a great Easter.
    Audra

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    1. I know, Audra! I have notes on paper and in files on my computer. I need to work on organizing things a little better so I don't have to hunt so much. ;-)

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  7. I read the 1st 2 books can’t wait for the 3rd!! Love series!

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  8. Looks and sounds amazing, Thanks for your great generosity. Linda May

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  9. Loved the first two books in the Hope Crossing series and cannot wait to read Loving the Rancher's Children. Such great stories!!!

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    1. Thank you, Linda. I hope you enjoy this one, too. :D

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  10. That's so interesting! Thanks for sharing about your process. :)

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  11. Thank you. Can’t wait to read the rest of the story😉

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    1. Anonymous, I hope you get the opportunity to do just that.

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  12. This book looks really interesting and fun to read. Thank you for the chance to win it. It's my favorite type of book. donakutska7@gmail.com@gmail.com

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    1. donakutska7@gmail.com is the correct email

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    2. You're so welcome! Thanks for stopping by. :)

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