Long ago I read this book where the teenage girl discovers she's a witch.
I can't remember title or plot, only that there's some struggle for her to accept this (Harry Potter-like, but it wasn't that book).
Finally, through the help of wise witch-ly mentors (Yeah there are plenty of those) she accepts herself and her talents.
Then the end of the book, she's lying on the floor and she'd created this ball in the air that looks like the planet Earth (I may be getting details wrong) and she's got several Earth balls and she's magically juggling them, realizing how powerful she is and how she can remake so many things to be better, as she perceives they should be.
Her mentor comes and sees it and says, "It's really tempting when you have magical power to want to juggle the whole world. Make it go where you want it to go and do what you want it to do, but you must not. That is an abuse of your power."
OKAY, I have a point to telling you this old, dimly remembered story.
That's how I see myself when I'm juggling my books, juggling the details. Tossing ideas up, catching them, turning them, adding, subtracting. I'm in charge of my world.
It's weirdly powerful even if it is in fiction.
I'm thinking of this today because of two reasons.
One...homing pigeons.
Two...ships.
I've been trying to figure out how the bad guys are communicating with each other. They are quite a few miles apart and secret partners.
So how do I let one know what the other needs to know to carry out their nefarious schemes.
I kept tossing ideas around, including just dropping it. No communication and how would I make what I want to do work.
I finally came up with homing pigeons. Did you know they were used a lot in war time back then? They even called the War Pigeons.
I do that. I lie awake and brainstorm my books alone. I'm not really in a good location for writer's groups, the kind that get together and brainstorm...and I like brainstorming. I've gotten some good things that way.
So I juggle my fictional world. Give it time. It's surprising how long it takes to wade through the first things that come to you and find the unusual, the nugget, that can be used.
I think homing pigeons meets that unusual nugget. Of course now I have to research homing pigeons.
And on to ships.
I'm thinking of a ship board romance. Get on a ship and sale around the tip of South America.
I could skip this. I've never done it before, though I've read a few historical ship stories. Honestly it's a little daunting to think of the research I need to do to get the whole SHIP part of the story right.
For that, a lot of research and a lot of brainstorming.
So how do you twist your story? How do you pass up the obvious and find the quirky, the unusual?
And do you get a sense of power over your fictional world?
Tell me how you brainstorm.
I look forward to your shipboard romance story! :) And I would love to help you brainstorm. I love brainstorming.
ReplyDeleteI tend to brainstorm my own stories alone...at least the major plot. If I tell the story to others before I have things well settled in my mind, the story takes on a life of its own with everyone's ideas, and I lose the thread of my original plot.
I tend to need to brainstorm once I have the plot solidified, and I have a problem, or something's missing, like the spiritual thread is weak, or the motivations, or subplots...
THAT'S RIGHT! ERICA DID A SHIP SERIES!!! I loved your ship stories, Erica.
DeleteI HAVE MY SOURCE!!! :)
I generally brainstorm alone, too..... there's not enough time to gather and think/talk, etc. Although I have been known to throw ideas out to Seekers or Beth Jamison and chat to see why I'm not getting a whole picture mentally because once I see the whole picture, I can move ahead.
ReplyDeleteIt's an interesting thought, brainstorming alone. :) With the voices in our heads, LOL!
I also find talking with editors about what they want to see is a help.
It's amazing how ideas can come together.
Ruthy, that's true, your editors help you brainstorm don't they!? That's something I don't have with my publisher. All their help comes after the book is done and of course it's a huge help but really different.
DeleteI still don't think I've learned the art of brainstorming. I think so many years of perfectionism really stifled my ability to think outside the ordinary and let my imagination go. It may also be why my plots are a little predictable :) I'll be interested to read the comments and see if I can find some ideas that work for me. Thanks for the post--and I'm reading Aiming for Love right now, Mary. Great book!
ReplyDeleteGlynis I'm glad you're enjoying Aiming for Love.
DeleteI have a writer friend who, as part of starting a book, writes a document that says, "Twenty Five Things That Could Happen." Then she just writes sentences of possible ways her story could go, possible developments and scenes. The document doesn't all get used but sometimes when she hits a rough patch to keep going, she pulls out that document.
That's a good idea. I may have to try it.
DeleteI tend to brainstorm alone. Sometimes I might run an idea by my husband to make sure it's not too crazy. And I find I do my best brainstorming while driving.(and yes, I know I should be focused on driving instead of plotting ��. But some of my best ideas have come from driving to work in the mornings.
ReplyDeleteDriving, huh? That's interesting. I've never tried that, at least not much. For me, (Insomnia Girl) it's in bed. In fact, I can tell if I'm going to have a good or bad night by how well I brainstorm. If my mind is unruly and keeps wandering away from the brainstorming then I'm probably going to have a sleepless night.
DeleteMary, this book you read sounds intriguing. If you ever remember the title, please share!
ReplyDeleteIn terms of brainstorming, yes, alone. Almost always alone. If anything, I'll bounce ideas off my son (he's eighteen) to get some initial encouragement, because he's so good at that. However, this makes me want to go a little bit more basic for a minute and talk about brainstorming on paper. I have found that my methods for getting those first thoughts down have changed and continue to change as I age. I read somewhere long ago that, when you brainstorm, you shouldn't worry about grammar or punctuation, and basically never backspace or erase during the process. I thought that was ridiculous. I was/am such a perfectionist, and it gave me anxiety to leave an error uncorrected. So, as I brainstormed way back when, I would write all my thoughts, slowly and carefully, holding the rest in my mind until it all came out in lovely, grammatically correct, already partially edited prose.
Then my thirties hit, and I found that there was no time for such care when brainstorming, because I would be writing one thought, and the rest would leave. my. brain. I would forget everything, and sometimes forget where I was headed mid-sentence. Now, I've gotten to the point that I don't even use punctuation. There's no time! Sometimes I still forget where I'm going when I brainstorm, but at least I understand now the importance of getting it down quickly.
When it comes to passing up the obvious and finding the unusual, I'm unsure. Do I even do that enough? I'm going to have to chew on that one, so thank you for making me think.
Also, that "feeling of power" is the reason I write, so we are on the same wavelength there, sister. :-)
I decided to go even more fundamental and look up definitions of the words I'm using. Turns out, what I was calling brainstorming long ago was actually drafting, so I guess the brainstorming process was all in my head. Using precise language is important for writers, so thanks for compelling me to contemplate and identify my processes, Mary!
DeleteHi Rachel, whatever the word, you do what works for you.
DeleteI know, last night, I was brainstorming in bed and I got a few key twists and got back up and, how I handle this is, I open the book document, which is a few steps and pretty daunting when I'm tired and wish I was asleep. But I know I'm at risk of forgetting my idea.
I just type a series of sentences.
I just went to see what I typed at the end of my document last night:
Hawkins breaks Randall Kingston out of jail, takes Win and Millicent hostage. Shoots at Kevin and Sheriff Gatlin. They’re running. Kevin chasing. Gatlin hit but not dead.
Millicent sick and exhausted. Win in the clutches of her father.
Pigeon group coming. But Hawkins is running straight to the hideout where the pigeon group is heading. Collide and find each other.
<<< some of this is mental shorthand but it makes sense to me. :) I hope.
I tend to brainstorm - I was going to say alone, but really it's with my characters. I have had to accept that no matter how hard I try to figure it out in advance, it's not until I actually sit down with my characters in the scene and let them work things out that the ideas start to flow. So quick drafting has become my new plotting method. If I have a (really) rough draft, I can at least write the synopsis for the proposal.
ReplyDeleteI do sometimes bounce ideas off friends, but I find that it mostly helps me just to say it out loud to someone other than my dog.
There you go, Cate. We're not alone when we have imaginary friends!!!
DeleteLiving on this ranch I brainstorm alone mostly, too. But I do have a couple of online writers groups I can bounce things off.
ReplyDeleteMostly I swirl ideas in my head and sit and stare, imagining scenarios, dialogue, scenes, and then I toss most of it out of my mental files until something sticks to the walls of my mind and won’t scrub off. 😊
Dalyn, I like that imagine of something sticking to the walls of your mind. That describes it pretty well!
DeleteI brainstorm alone, too. I tell myself I can do it while I play solitaire on the computer...but that isn't really true.
ReplyDeleteDaydreaming - which was highly underrated by my teachers in grade school - is my most valuable tool. Or I'll do something completely different (like walk the pup or take a shower) and let the ideas "simmer on the back of the stove." When the ideas start coming, I write them down in a kind a mind map....and when I run out of paper, I know it's time to solidify the idea that I like the best.
My husband is a great one to bounce ideas off of, too - I'll run an idea for a scene past him and his response lets me know if it's realistic or if I need to go back to the drawing board!
Jan, your husband helps some, really? Mine gets this sort of insanely PATIENT look on his face while I talk. It's not encouraging.
DeleteI mostly brainstorm alone. I feel like brainstorming and coming up with the beginning pieces is the hardest for me. It's usually filled with a lot of frustration
ReplyDeleteFrustration is sometimes a writer's only companion!!!
DeleteHi Mary:
ReplyDeleteFirst: Check the scenes in the movie, "Master and Commander" for a harrowing trip around the tip of South America. It's so graphic it's like being there. That trip was very dangerous with many storms. Ships often had to give up and go around the tip of Africa instead. That's thousands of miles out of the way!!!
Second: in advertising when we have deadlines, often more than one a day, and we'd need ideas we would use 'free association'. That is we would just sit down and type anything that came into our heads, page after page, until something stood out as useable. This always worked if you kept at it. It's like the mind just gives up blocking you and gives you something good to get it off its back. Metaphorically speaking of course.
For brainstorming a specific problem, like how to solve a symbolic logic problem, which by the way you can put dozens of hours of work trying solve and still get nothing for all that suffering, we used programming the subconscious mind. I had to do this many times myself. Just tell your submind what the problem is and to be working on it subconsciously as you go about your normal routine. When the sub gets the solution it will pop it up into your conscious mind. This always worked for me over the weekend when I had problems due for Monday class. Of course, it helped to be walking along the beach in Santa Barbara while the sub was slaving away. Those solutions would just pop up full blown like getting a satori on how to checkmate an opponent in three moves in chess. Sweet.
On communications: Robin Hood = whistling arrows sent to relay stations. It would just take minutes to send a written message for miles. Greeks = had signal fires ready to burn that could be seen for miles from hilltops to alert the homeland that the Trojan war was won. Of course, these fire stations had to be manned for 10 years before beign used. Indians = smoke signals. Africans = drums. Army = mirrors. But, best of all, invent something yourself that has not been used yet!!!
BTW: Congrats on being up for a Maggie award. I see you are up against two members of the Club that awards the award. How is that going to work out? I'd give you the award for the cover art alone. (Still wondering what tribe used those arrow feathers.)
Vince
Hi Vince...I've heard of Master and Commander but never seen it. It's a book too, isn't it? I'll do both!!!
DeleteI've done brainstorming sessions with a group and found that right at the end, when your time is almost up, and the author feels like, okay that's enough, I can use what we've come up with...that's when people get silly, start really throwing up wild ideas and often really interesting stuff happens. So your pages of free writing...it makes sense you'd have success with that.
And thank you for the communication ideas. I like that.
And the Maggie, the truth is, I was planning to go to the Moonlight and Magnolia Conference this year. I have some Seeker buddies who are regular attenders and I've always wanted to go.
And so I entered...and then it got cancelled. So the finalist thing is nice and enough. I only wanted to see my friends anyway, so if it's hard to win against club members ... well, then I'll be prepared.
Hi Mary:
DeleteI think you can watch the whole movie, "Master and Commander" for free on YouTube at any time. As I understand it, the movie is a composite of several of the books which real fans were not happy about. The book I think you'd want to read about the trip around Cape Horn, Tierra del Fuego, is "The Far Side of the World". The book would have great descriptions that I think you'd fine very helpful. Remember: there are also icebergs down there as well!
I tend to come up with my basic character info alone. But then when I start on the plot (or sometimes after I've written the first three chapters) I might talk it over with my critique partners. They've been a big help.
ReplyDeleteMary, I love the idea of a ship series!
Right now, as a means of escape, three women either stow away on a ship...or they get jobs...high born ladies get jobs as maids and cooks on a ship. I see one of them falling in love on the ship and the ship goes from San Francisco to Galveston Texas. One couple is arranged and possibly married...and the women may still be pursued...anyway, other stuff. But one ship board romance and two Texas romances...the way Mary Connealy was intended to write!
DeleteBlogger ate my comment apparently so I will try again. I brainstorm alone and I do find that I can often come up with ideas when I take a walk as long as I don't forget them when I get home.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the Maggie nomination!
I suppose, fundamentally, writing is just plain solitary. If we can't do it alone...we can't do it.
DeleteIt was so nice to see you, Sandy. Just so NICE! It's been a very ISOLATED TIME.
Mary, it was really wonderful to see you. I agree that in this time when we don't get to see many people, it is great to see somebody! Hopefully it won't be long and we can all get together again.
DeleteI had two ideas pop into my head as I was writing the book I submitted last WED. Both were when the heroine was being chased by the villain...and both, I thought, were quite unusual. Outside the box, so to speak. Totally inspired and not from me...and each one came to me in a flash. I love how God works! :)
ReplyDeleteUsually plotting my story takes a number of weeks. During that time, I'm brainstorming with myself as you mentioned. Once upon a time, pre-Corona, I brainstormed with two writing friends, which was fun and energizing. Those were the days!
surely we'll get those days back sometime!!!
DeleteI tend to brainstorm alone, too, although I love helping others brainstorm. When I first started writing, I wrote nothing down. Now, I keep a notebook of story ideas and jot down things in a sort of rough outline as I have the scenes become more cemented in my brain. By the end of drafting a book, those pages are usually covered in scribbles and arrows and side-notes and mark-throughs. But it's so useful to be able to look at it all at once. I have become a plantser. :-)
ReplyDeleteI consider myself good at brainstorming (though I might be kidding myself). I love listening to story ideas and tossing out suggestions.
DeleteBelieve it or not, I often brainstorm with my husband. He really enjoys it. And he's pretty good. But I do a lot on my own, too. If I'm looking for a twist, I always ask myself, "What's the worst thing that could happen right now?" It usually works. Of course, then I have to find a way to make whatever that worst thing is happen.
ReplyDeleteMindy LOL that's honestly the best question ever. I'm going to adopt it.
DeleteI think I'm a little too nice to my characters, although I did just shoot a lady Pinkerton agent in the heart. But a button stopped the bullet. She's going to be fine!!!! I had her dead at first and just didn't like doing it. So I just wounded her.
I have a girlfriend who is amazing with coming up with story ideas if I'm stuck. I just call her to help me work through some scenarios.
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